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belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on January 28, 2007, 07:57:38 pm ---I guess I should post the update!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/206519.html "34. Breakfast Food"
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Oh, Louise, how appropriate to read this just after I had my breakfast :)
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“Point is...” Ennis frowned, then gathered himself. “Point is, I been thinkin about how guilty I’d be about takin somethin for myself, livin with you, bein happy for once. The real point is, you an me bein together is a damn sight bettern when Bill ran a porn video ring out a the bar an Wayne was hittin on every boy comin the door. Now... it must seem like – well kinda like a family.”
“Goddamn, boy,” Ellery said, his eyes darkening with emotion. “That is some kind a breakfast conversation.”
“Maybe... we ought ta just let anybody come who wants ta,” Ennis said. “Cause it ain’t about me an you – we’re their family.”
This is just beautiful Louise. Very moving.
Thank you.
louisev:
aww, thank you Fabienne!
I am glad nobody got mad at how late that chapter was yesterday...!
magicmountain:
--- Quote from: souxi on January 28, 2007, 07:30:59 am ---Astounding eh? I just bet he is!! ;) ;)
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Souxi I just LOVE this emoticon! Sooooooooooo funny.
mariez:
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Yeah - Fabienne said it - beautiful and moving. We were talking about Ellery and his grandfather not so long ago during the re-read. Really nice to hear him open up to Ennis even though it is painful for him.
And after all the talk about a "small circle of friends" - how wonderful to see wise, thoughtful Ennis talking about "one big trying-to-be-happy family."
Couldn't love that chapter more, Louise! Thanks.
Marie
MaineWriter:
I wonder if Ennis will relent enough to let Edna bake a cake? I know he'll never cave in on the dancing, though!
L
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