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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 09, 2007, 01:57:09 pm ---Woo Wee! Thanks, Louise - I think I'll give myself a little reading coffee break.
:-*
Marie
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Looks like Jeeves needs a coffee break too.
A bogus letter from the Inland Revenu? Who would send him that? hmmm, more mystery although i believe his story about Chas Chesterfield.
and....
'“That last part is meant ta be funny is it?” Joe Tooey commented.'
:laugh: :laugh: You can always count on Joe to put a smile on your face.
Thanks Louise
louisev:
someone from the Inland Revenue doing a favor for a Stanhope I suppose.
right ?
;)
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on May 09, 2007, 02:16:10 pm --- . . .
A bogus letter from the Inland Revenu? Who would send him that? hmmm, more mystery although i believe his story about Chas Chesterfield.
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--- Quote from: louise van hine on May 09, 2007, 02:27:39 pm ---someone from the Inland Revenue doing a favor for a Stanhope I suppose.
right ?
;)
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Well, that sounds about right - LOL! Can't wait for Chief Deputy Ellery J. Cantrell to get back and start unraveling this mystery with that genius I.Q. - love seeing that man in action - any kind of action (or inaction for that matter)! ;D
Great chapter, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
okay so I have an interpretive question for you hardcore readers, and by hardcore I think you know what I mean...
what do you think of the more-mystery less-bedroom plot?
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on May 09, 2007, 03:08:00 pm ---okay so I have an interpretive question for you hardcore readers, and by hardcore I think you know what I mean...
what do you think of the more-mystery less-bedroom plot?
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SPOILERS
I'm really enjoying this story. the dialogue and banter are first-rate as always. It has a great central mystery - about Jeeves. It has some great subplots involving not only the rape investigation, but the evolving relationship between Ellery and Paula, and Jeremy's strong reaction to . . . well, I'm not exactly sure who or what Jeremy is reacting to. I love when Jeremy and Colson have their heart-to-heart chats, and I'm guessing we'll see another of those soon. I also really liked seeing Joe in his deputy role - there's a man that can hold his own against anyone. It seems that this particular story lends itself to a more-mystery plot - there's a lot going on!
Having said that, I know I wouldn't object overmuch if Ellery needed a little backrub and lovin' from Colson after such a stressful day, or if Jeeves left the station in time to meet Jerry for the movie and ... whatever - or if Sweet Thing goes home and has his Nicky make it all better as only his Nicky can! ;) :laugh:
Looking forward to more!
Marie
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