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opinionista:
I am beginning to feel sorry for Chas!

louisev:
and now, chapter... 6 !

http://louisev.livejournal.com/217791.html

mariez:
Another great chapter, Louise.  When I said there was a lot going on in this story I didn't know the half of it!

Thanks,
Marie

SPOILERISH P.S.

Colson mentioned Jeremy's mother - how is she, btw? I seem to remember a telephone call...... ;)

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on May 10, 2007, 05:43:12 pm ---and now, chapter... 6 !

http://louisev.livejournal.com/217791.html

--- End quote ---


SPOILER



I don't get it. What was Jeremy thinking that he could talk about stuff like this with Colson? He doesn't want to talk to Ellery about it because he'll end up all embarrassed, so he talks to Colson and embarrasses him? hmmm...

Colson's right, it's Ellery he should be telling this, but considering all the gossiping that's going on at the Stallion, I'd be surprised if Ellery didn't already know this.

Great chapter Louise! and yeah, all the mothering is so nice.  :)

louisev:
He doesn't want to talk about it with Ellery because he had been attracted to Ellery.  Colson is a friend.  Ellery is a former fantasy man for him and is his boss.  Talking to Colson is, in a way, like asking permission.

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