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louisev:
yes here it is:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/223811.html  The Chesterfield Fortune, ch. 26.

Maria has chained me to the computer for the morning and I can't even escape to the piano!

yb:
SPOILER




Exciting!  Can't wait for the next chapter to see what's going to happen between Jeeves & Sergio.   :)

mariez:
SPOILERS






I can't wait either - you really have perfected the art of always leaving your readers wanting more, Louise!  I found this chapter fascinating on so many levels. 

“Your history is beginning to sound a bit like mine.”    Who would have ever imagined Jeeves saying those words to Sergio? 

Does Cantrell know about this?”  Yes, as Sergio said, I'm sure he does - not much gets past Ellery and I seem to remember a conversation he had with Colson on the general subject of the "rough trade."  It will be interesting to see the reactions of the different characters regarding 717 Bluebird Lane.

Man’s got ta get what he can when he can. You got nobody at home, you can’t do anythin more tonight here, an I ain’t got nobody ta be with.

“Good god, what have I become?” Chas murmured, . . . .

These lines are so sad in their honesty.

But, as usual, there's a line that made me laugh out loud:

Ya could tie up a Spanish duke an give em what for.”    :laugh: 


Thanks,
Marie

louisev:


always great to see the comments!  and now, for a more serious take:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/224015.html  The Chesterfield Fortune:  chapter 27.

mariez:
Serious, indeed, and very sad.  Well done, Louise.

Thanks,
Marie

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