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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
mariez:
SPOILERS
Oh, Louise - you gave us a Sweet Thing and Nicky chapter!!! Thank You :-*
"Mr. Deputy Legs"? LOL!! I love that - that is so Nick. And I loved that entire conversation. Nick's comment about Ellery's sarcastic way is a hoot. Talk about pot and kettle! :laugh:
“You don’t think I could change yer mind, huh?” Nick tugged on the sash of his robe.
“Hm...” Jeremy unbuttoned his shirt and discarded his tie. “Maybe. Lemme see.”
Jeremy was deeply asleep, one bare, cold arm flung over his head, the other securely holding Nick against his chest, . . .
Ahh yes, I knew it wouldn't take these boys too long to get their priorities straight! ;D
Loved it, Louise!
Marie
P.S. I do believe this is the first time Wes has used the "fearless leader" line on Jeremy. I really liked hearing that - it's like Jeremy has been given the secret handshake or something. And yay! Jeremy knows he's getting the promotion - that should help him wake up. :)
belbbmfan:
Great chapter Louise! I love the banter between Nicky and Jeremy.
And the fearless leader adds a few new entries to his 'memorable quotes' list:
“You been recreatin when we are on emergency service, Detective?”
“When a man’s got apple pie he don’t need sleep."
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
And hooray for Jeremy's promotion! Another party at Wes and Edna's in the making. Or will it be at Colson and Ellery's? hmmm
louisev:
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another chapter on its way!
louisev:
chesterfield 35! with lots of Jeeves and Sergio and even Ellery goodness!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/226636.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 07, 2007, 11:16:29 am ---chesterfield 35! with lots of Jeeves and Sergio and even Ellery goodness!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/226636.html
--- End quote ---
SPOILERS
Well, we're all in fine form this morning!
“Damn. Now I know why Lance went for ya – you sure do crack the whip. What’d Simon say?”
“He said take two steps back. Now hurry.”
:laugh: :laugh: LMAO!!
'.....An no I ain’t better so no butterfieldin me up,” Ellery said. ... '
:laugh: :laugh: Again!
“I could pose as yer lawyer.”
“Only until you opened your mouth, ...
:laugh: :laugh: And yet again!
Louise, you ROCK!!!
Thanks,
Marie
P.S. Jeeves is so great in this story - and, so far, he and Sergio make a pretty good team!
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