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yb:
Louise, you know I enjoy your writing as ever.  But ... honestly, I'm getting quite fed up with the nasty attitudes Ellery and the others have towards Jeeves.  I surely hope things will turn around in the future.

louisev:


He is a foreigner, and rural Americans are not known for their international multiculturalism.  Besides, Jeeves has scored a few moral points against several people in the story and has made his way despite their prickliness.  And this isn't Ellery's story anyway.  If Ellery were really concerned about a problem with Chas he might have had him arrested or ordered out of the bar, but he didn't.  He sees Chas as a minor annoyance in a world of major annoyances.

yb:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 07, 2007, 12:20:26 pm ---
He is a foreigner, and rural Americans are not known for their international multiculturalism. 

--- End quote ---

I had thought about this, but it's still quite annoying.  I don't really care about Simon, Dupree etc, but Ellery and Colson are at a different level to me, so I hope they will be more receptive of Jeeves.  Yeah, not really rational thinking, I know!  Enough of rants here, I'll surely wait to see how this story develops.

louisev:


If it is any comfort, Jeeves being in a position of hero may win him some grudging respect, at least from the people whose opinions matter.

opinionista:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 07, 2007, 01:16:54 pm ---
If it is any comfort, Jeeves being in a position of hero may win him some grudging respect, at least from the people whose opinions matter.

--- End quote ---

I think Jeeves and Ellery have the potential to become good friends if they get over their respectives egos. They're somewhat alike: rich, educated, arrogant and a pain in the ass. I like Ellery but I have to admit that he can be rather arrogant when he wants to. However, underneath, they're both loving men who really care about their friends and lovers.

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