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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
notBastet:
stupid ex-boyfriend Bill that is!!!
(his name hasn't been changed has it?)
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: notBastet on November 07, 2007, 07:39:23 pm ---stupid ex-boyfriend Bill that is!!!
(his name hasn't been changed has it?)
--- End quote ---
No, it hasn't, Kelly.
MaineWriter:
receptionist at the Sheriff's Office
(it is Carol, right? I am doing this from memory!)
notBastet:
our favorite Deputy Sheriff of course!
Ellery shrugged. "Or maybe I could make ya something else. A friend for example. You don't suppose you'd care ta be my friend would ya Colson? For the price of a T-bone steak maybe."
Colson raised his glass, his heart feeling full, and not at all jittery at this proposal. "That sounds like the right price, Deputy Sheriff."
(I don't have the re-written version, so I just substituted Colson's name...)
MaineWriter:
like, duh! I had to play it!
From "What I Did On My Day Off," one of my favorite Ellery thoughts:
Rushing down those stairs, throbbing everywhere a man could throb without being beat up, was when I knew I'd fallen in love with a man I'd just met, and at the moment there wasn't a damn thing I could do about it. It was time to be the law. And for that half hour, I really fucking hated my job.
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