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louisev:
update to "Dupree's Choice"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/173080.html "13. Jeremy"
louisev:
--- Quote from: yb on December 08, 2006, 09:14:14 am ---Is this "Ellery meets Ennis" about the beginning of their relationship from Ellery's POV?
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yup.
I am even going to experiment here, I think, and write it in the first person.
David:
--- Quote from: RonitR on December 08, 2006, 09:05:07 am ---I don't think I've seen this picture of Dupree before.
I mean, Nick looks good, but Dupree looks just...just...good god it's HOT in here!!
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I do have some better pics of our Nick, but they require some ...um, editing to make them g-rated. He has a nice profile too.
yb:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 08, 2006, 09:15:35 am ---yup.
I am even going to experiment here, I think, and write it in the first person.
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This is great. I know some people don't like reading stories written in the first person, but I've read a few and liked them a lot, of course it all depends on the writer's ability and I'm sure this'll be as riveting as the others you have written.
Kazza:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 08, 2006, 09:15:04 am ---update to "Dupree's Choice"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/173080.html "13. Jeremy"
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SPOLIER
OK -so now I'm confused. Is Nick losing his shine slightly, or is it just Jeremy's nervousness that's throwing me off? I just thought he seemed a little pushy or something. Nothing definate, just something subtle. :-\
It could be just be because Lance voiced his doubts and we've been discussing it here. :-\
Mmmm... gonna have to go back and read it again slowly.
Love the idea of and Ellery meets Ennis story from Ellery's POV. ;D
Karen
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