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Lumière:
I caught up on all the chapters! YAY!
It is 3 am over here, I am buzzed from the wine I had all evening, yet when I got home, I thought about what Nick and Jeremy were up to and caught up on my chapters ... lol Talk about obsession!! ;)
Spoilers......
My heart is breaking for Nick. He is so self-destructive and has such a low self-esteem .. Who woulda thought it? What can I say, looks can be deceiving!
He has referred to himself as "poison" no less that 3 or 4 times so far and it breaks my heart.
I am not even angry at him for potentially fucking up things with Jeremy, I just feel so sorry for him .. :'(
Nick is using sex to drown out his inner turmoil and emotional issues, pushing Jeremy away from himself as best he can, although he has confessed that Jeremy is the one he wants. Jeremy will probably be gutted if he finds out about Nicky's little sexcapade with Ray the Lumberyard jerk. :'(
On that note, I'm off to bed .. :-\
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: magicmountain on December 09, 2006, 08:28:32 pm ---SPOILER
Nick - A damaged young boy behind that confident, cocky facade. He's got a lot of growing up to to do. His meeting Jeremy may just be the start of his journey to adulthood.
Paula - Her blurting out that comment about Ellery's ring was embarrassing. But she is deeply attracted and off balance around him. She was surprised and dismayed to see the ring and and she let it show. Search your collective memory banks people. It happens!
Jeremy - Seems to be slowly getting his act together and getting a grip on the situation. Nick did Jeremy a service in awakening him sexually. Perhaps Jeremy can return the favour by awakening Nick emotionally and ethically.
PS Ellery would probably see straight through Nick's facade if he ever meets him.
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Thanks for this, Jo :)
David:
--- Quote from: Lucise on December 10, 2006, 06:10:40 am ---
Jeremy will probably be gutted if he finds out about Nicky's little sexcapade with Ray the Lumberyard jerk. :'(
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That is quite the understatement. Not only will Jeremy be devastated, it will undermine any progress the two boys have made so far.
Someone (other than Jeremy) needs to sit this boy down and tell him that Jeremy is worth behaving himself over. Damn that legbone! We need Ennis!
RonitR:
--- Quote from: Lucise on December 10, 2006, 06:10:40 am ---
I am not even angry at him for potentially fucking up things with Jeremy, I just feel so sorry for him .. :'(
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Ditto. He has been handed such a beautiful gift, and is single-handedly destroying it..
David:
Well, at first I was thinking some time in a cell might be good for Nick, so he can think about his behavior. But then again, he might just keep thinking of himself as poison and do more stupid things.
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