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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
louisev:
and here is another update for you hungry Elleryites:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/186286.html "6. Warming Up"
magicmountain:
SPOILER
Well looks like Ellery is very good actor because, although he is feeling insecure, in Ennis' eyes is he the epitome of self confidence - however for someone as shy as Ennis the effect could be magnified!
This reminds us that under all that carry on and "dominatin'" ellery often feels insecure and this is a salient feature of his ongoing relationship with Ennis.
notBastet:
--- Quote from: magicmountain on December 18, 2006, 06:19:30 pm ---SPOILER
This reminds us that under all that carry on and "dominatin'" ellery often feels insecure and this is a salient feature of his ongoing relationship with Ennis.
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YEP!
Kazza:
Wow - it is so good to be able to read this story from a different angle. Isn't it funny how Ellery's behaviour and motivations take on a slightly different complexion when we read it from his perspective. I mean, we all thought of him as super confident when we first met him. The development of the Laramie Saga showed us his insecurities, and just how deeply they affected him, but there was no sign of this at the beginning.
Now we get to do it all again. ;D
Karen
richardg49:
--- Quote from: Kazza on December 18, 2006, 06:51:37 pm ---Wow - it is so good to be able to read this story from a different angle. Isn't it funny how Ellery's behaviour and motivations take on a slightly different complexion when we read it from his perspective.
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I agree, Karen. One aspect of his behaviour that never came through in the earlier version is the way he goes to so much trouble to 'background check' Ennis' story, even going to the trouble of contacting the Riverton courthouse to confirm that Ennis' claim that he is divorced is, in fact, true. Just goes to show how smitten he has already become at this very early stage of their relationship. Does anyone else think that it is slightly unethical of him to use his position in the Sheriff's office to obtain this information?
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