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Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
mariez:
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What a great paragraph
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--- Quote from: yb on December 19, 2006, 09:44:44 pm ---I'm in the middle of this chapter, but I so agree, this paragraph made my heart race.
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Yep - great paragraph and it made my heart race too. This is my favorite moment from TC- when Ennis notices Ellery "regarding" him (what a perfect word) and it looks like it will be my favorite moment from "What I Did . ." also. I think of it as the thunderbolt moment between them.
Really superb writing, Louise!
Thanks - Marie
Kazza:
I just want to say - "Wyle E. Cantrell And Deputy Del Mar" - what a cracking title! Brought a big smile to my face.
And the 'look' across the table - yeah, we all know where that's leading. :laugh:
I'm really trying to read this as if I don't know the outcome as Ellery doesn't from his perspective.
Louise - good luck with your packing and moving and travelling and stuff. I can't believe that you're still finding time to write with all this going on.
Karen
David:
Indeed! Good luck with your move.
Maybe we'll take a peek at what Jeremy and Nicky are up too while your gone? I've sent my photographers to Laramie!
louisev:
--- Quote from: Kazza on December 20, 2006, 07:00:59 am ---I just want to say - "Wyle E. Cantrell And Deputy Del Mar" - what a cracking title! Brought a big smile to my face.
And the 'look' across the table - yeah, we all know where that's leading. :laugh:
I'm really trying to read this as if I don't know the outcome as Ellery doesn't from his perspective.
Louise - good luck with your packing and moving and travelling and stuff. I can't believe that you're still finding time to write with all this going on.
Karen
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well, let's just say, I arrived with 8 large suitcases and a computer was shipped by mail. And that is all I am leaving with, plus a digital piano. So --- it isnt as onerous as it sounds. In fact it might be the lightest duty move I've made considering the length of time I've been here!
And David, the "goneness" is only very temporary. I will still be around, and will be writing through next week (as energy permits, with the possible exception of Wednesday when I am having a belated Christmas dinner with my friend Jane) but I just won't be PROMISING anything! if you know what i mean.
louisev:
Update time people!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/187090.html "9. Much Ado About Wilson"
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