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magicmountain:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 20, 2006, 02:46:22 pm ---update time
More fantasizing as Ennis gradually caves in to Deputy Darlin:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/187317.html "10. Sweet Mystery of Lust"
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From Naughty Marietta
Ah! Sweet mystery of life, at last I've found thee
Ah! At last I know the secret of it all
All the longing, seekiing, striving, waiting, yearning,
The idle hopes, the joys and burning tears that fall!
For 'tis love, and love alone, the world is seeking;
And it's love, and love alone, I've waitted for;
And my heart has heard the answer to it's calling
For it is love that rules for evermore!
Sigh
louisev:
and here is the update!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/187616.html "11. The Big Picture"
MaineWriter:
This story is getting better and better....just loving hearing Ellery's point of view on everything that is going on.
Folks, you might want to join us at the re-readers club (on the Ennis and Ellery thread). We are enjoying re-living the early weeks of E&E's relationship.
Leslie
ranchgal:
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this is one of my very favorite lines--made me sigh just reading it!!!
"But up until now, my universe was full of Bills, and Genes, Wilsons and Petes. An Ennis didn’t come along but once in a blue moon – in fact, I’d never seen one."
I think this is one of the best idea lines I have read---I just love it!!
Once in a blue moon---yes he is so right---An Ennis doesn't come along very often, and I haven't met more than one either. LOL
mariez:
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--- Quote from: ranchgal on December 20, 2006, 09:37:00 pm ---"But up until now, my universe was full of Bills, and Genes, Wilsons and Petes. An Ennis didn’t come along but once in a blue moon – in fact, I’d never seen one."
I think this is one of the best idea lines I have read---I just love it!!
Once in a blue moon---yes he is so right---An Ennis doesn't come along very often, and I haven't met more than one either. LOL
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So true! This sentence also hit me hard:
I missed his belt buckle by inches when my hand closed on that doorknob, and I felt crazy right then – crazy to just put my hand there, pull him against me, and feel the flesh that went with the soul of the man who found it just pure common sense to say “Well I think I get that, Ellery.” I wanted to find out what it felt to make love with somebody who had some idea of the big picture, for the first time in my empty, fucked up life.
Oh, they need each other so much - and have so much to give to each other!
You are a wonder, Louise! Thank you for giving Ellery to Ennis and Ennis to Ellery! :)
Marie
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