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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1440 on: January 22, 2007, 06:47:13 pm »
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... by the end of the night every man jack is going to have one of Nate's cards bristling from his shirt pocket.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1441 on: January 22, 2007, 07:02:26 pm »
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Have to agree about this being so Ellery! ..

...and another scribbled note by Ellery on his notepad in large letters “GET THE FUCK DONE ASSHOLE” and stabbed the pad repeatedly, slowly and savagely.
...

And so true-to-life!  As a prosecutor I can't tell you how many times those words -or versions thereof  ;D -  have gone through my mind while I sat there with my courtroom poker face!  Of course, I would never write it down - that is a pure Ellery twist!   :laugh:

Louise, that was just brilliant - could any more shit possibly hit the fan?  Well, actually, YES - I guess it could - because we don't yet know what Ennis will do!!!   :laugh:  I don't know how I'll sleep waiting for that!

And Nate's business card "bristling" from all the shirt pockets?   :laugh: Perfect!

Thanks!  Marie

P.S. I felt bad for Lauren - awww... he actually felt sick! 

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1442 on: January 22, 2007, 07:14:49 pm »
Can't you just see the look on Jeremys face when Nick let slip the "Sweet thing" name!  Plus the look on Nicks face when he realized he slipped and covered his mouth with his hand!    LOL

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1443 on: January 22, 2007, 07:29:49 pm »
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Can't you just see the look on Jeremys face when Nick let slip the "Sweet thing" name!  Plus the look on Nicks face when he realized he slipped and covered his mouth with his hand!    LOL


Yes - I can see the looks on both their faces perfectly! And it's so funny that at first Nick made a quick save . . . but then he fumbled with the "sweet thing!"  Oh, well - he's crazy in love (and probably still on a make-up sex and new-hat high!) LOL!!

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1444 on: January 22, 2007, 07:51:57 pm »
oh come on now... does anyone believe Nick actually slipped?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1445 on: January 22, 2007, 07:53:06 pm »
Can't you just see the look on Jeremys face when Nick let slip the "Sweet thing" name!  Plus the look on Nicks face when he realized he slipped and covered his mouth with his hand!    LOL

He didn't slip at all. That was totally on purpose.
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1446 on: January 22, 2007, 08:17:42 pm »
oh come on now... does anyone believe Nick actually slipped?


LOL!!! Okay, okay - but . . . the Edna in me still thinks he's crazy in love, etc.! 

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1447 on: January 22, 2007, 08:39:11 pm »

You one a these lookin out inta the sunset holdin hands kinda gals?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1448 on: January 22, 2007, 08:56:48 pm »
You one a these lookin out inta the sunset holdin hands kinda gals?

LOL!  I guess I must be, Louise - at least when it comes to our Laramie boys!  As Wes has stated - his Edna is a powerful influence (and not just domestically)!   :laugh:

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1449 on: January 22, 2007, 09:17:58 pm »
LOL!  I guess I must be, Louise - at least when it comes to our Laramie boys!  As Wes has stated - his Edna is a powerful influence (and not just domestically)!   :laugh:

Marie

Count me in with you, Marie!

Mention Ellery's hair, their rings...I am just a puddle on the floor. LOL

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