Author Topic: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes  (Read 19880 times)

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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #20 on: June 11, 2007, 12:29:11 pm »
He put "17" on his box
it looked better,
though he knew in his heart
there would be no letter.
« Last Edit: June 11, 2007, 10:40:46 pm by TOoP/Bruce »
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #21 on: June 11, 2007, 07:24:12 pm »

An acrid,
feline, fulsome scent
issues from
the canvas tent.
« Last Edit: June 11, 2007, 07:56:19 pm by TOoP/Bruce »
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #22 on: June 11, 2007, 07:57:25 pm »

Their mouths had met
Like lock and key.
Alma watched
Dumbfoundedly.
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #23 on: June 11, 2007, 07:59:17 pm »

The Chatterbox
with whom he danced
had a spouse
Who caught his glance.
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #24 on: June 11, 2007, 08:00:53 pm »

"I aint no sinner --
least not yet!
But after dinner?
Hell... YOU BET!
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #25 on: June 11, 2007, 08:02:53 pm »


The hippie scene --
The bus in Lake.
Was deleted.
Big mistake.
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #26 on: June 11, 2007, 08:04:12 pm »


The sleigh-ride ends
in mock attack.
He wrestled her
and thought of Jack.

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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #27 on: June 11, 2007, 08:05:09 pm »

She penned a note
and sat at table.
She kept her cool
as much as able.
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #28 on: June 11, 2007, 08:06:06 pm »


The children at
the grocery store
Drop the glass jars
on the floor.
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Re: The Riverton Home for Orphaned Rhymes
« Reply #29 on: June 11, 2007, 08:07:27 pm »

Construction work's
a thankless chore.
Tim talks too much
and is a bore.
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