Author Topic: In Plain Sight by Victopet  (Read 25467 times)

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #40 on: August 03, 2008, 10:20:35 pm »
Chapter 27 is up (and the promise of "more on the way")!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/19767.html


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This story keeps getting better and better.  I thought the dialogue in this chapter was masterful.  And the closing paragraph is gorgeous - they're falling in love.   :)

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #41 on: September 08, 2008, 06:32:05 pm »
Chapter 28!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/20033.html  :)

Author's note:...I've got the next chapter almost ready and I hope to be posting it shortly....


Another terrific chapter - her pacing is spot on.  They're just about to have "the talk" about Kurt so the next chapter should answer some questions (and maybe raise a few more?) 

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #42 on: December 28, 2008, 11:40:26 am »
Chapters 29 and 30 are up!

Authors' Note:  Hi everyone -- It's been very slow going for me with the writing -- work and the family are quite hectic.  But I have 12 days off between the holidays and am hoping to crank out a few chapters.  This one is probably rated PG, but this and the next will go far to explaining a lot of different things and setting the stage for how our boys relate from here on out.  Happy Reading -- and once again, sorry for the long delay. For those of you still reading,  let me know what you think.

Vic


http://victopet.livejournal.com/20488.html?#cutid1

http://victopet.livejournal.com/20848.html?#cutid1


Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #43 on: December 28, 2008, 06:41:15 pm »
as well as chapter 31!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/21134.html?#cutid1


You could cut the tension between them with a knife...

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #44 on: December 29, 2008, 07:28:14 pm »
I sure hope Victopet will update soon....shes driving me crazy! :laugh:

Ive been refreashing my friends page on LJ several times today. Im a bit eager ;D

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #45 on: December 29, 2008, 08:58:27 pm »
I sure hope Victopet will update soon....shes driving me crazy! :laugh:

Ive been refreashing my friends page on LJ several times today. Im a bit eager ;D

LOL.  You and me both.  What a place to leave us  - and them - hanging! 

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #46 on: January 04, 2009, 02:27:01 pm »
Chapter 33 of In Plain Sight is up!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/21548.html

It really feels like shes working her way up to an action packed chapter....*bite my nails*

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #47 on: January 12, 2009, 02:15:06 pm »
Chapter 34:

http://victopet.livejournal.com/21772.html

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We learn more about Velda's boyfriend and what their plans are for the night.....

You can almost see the wheels turning in Ennis's head in this chapter, and the puzzle pieces shifting into place...

And we finally (kind of) meet Kurt/K.E. in person.... another cliffhanger. 

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #48 on: January 12, 2009, 08:13:29 pm »



      I really love this story.  I just wish we didnt have to wait so long between updates.



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Re: In Plain Sight by Victopet
« Reply #49 on: February 23, 2009, 01:50:26 pm »
and chapter 35 is up


http://victopet.livejournal.com/22256.html

Ennis finally comes face to face with his brother Kurt