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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #210 on: October 08, 2007, 11:29:48 am »
That always kills me, because I think I fall more to the side of "fem".


Honey we all are when the lights are low and the wine is strong  ;D

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #211 on: October 08, 2007, 11:35:38 am »
Honey we all are when the lights are low and the wine is strong  ;D

haahahaa!   Well, I don't drink wine!  lmao!


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #212 on: October 08, 2007, 11:39:28 am »
haahahaa!   Well, I don't drink wine!  lmao!

Ok the Cosmo's then...

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #213 on: October 08, 2007, 11:43:42 am »
Honey we all are when the lights are low and the wine is strong  ;D
Don't know about that!  ;D
"The biggest obstacle to most of us achieving our dreams isn't reality, it's our own fear"

"Saint Paul had his Epiphany on the road to Damascus, Mine was on Brokeback Mountain"

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #214 on: October 08, 2007, 11:46:30 am »
Don't know about that!  ;D

Stop lying...it's not becoming  ;D

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #215 on: October 08, 2007, 11:57:51 am »
Happy Monday, BetterMost!

It's good to see you all today!

I'm in recovery mode today, after the events of the weekend.   ;D  It was good to be together with the Brokies this weekend, and my cousin's wedding last night was fun as all hell!

I'll post a few pics from it later!

Today's music vid is not my usual taste, but I like it!  It's a new song that is starting to get some airplay here on NYC radio.

Paralyzer by Finger Eleven.


[youtube=425,350]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYGCT4AQIR0[/youtube]



My poem is one I wrote about a year and a half ago.....my mindset has changed since then, and some of the things I mention are not part of my thought pattern anymore, but since I wrote it, and it was what I was thinking at the time, I'm posting it.









Wasting Time

_______________________

Sitting alone by the computer
as the clock ticks by the minutes
I am being kept company
by the refridgerator
as it's moter drones on and on
and I wonder
how much of my life I've wasted
trying to be what others wanted
and not doing what I needed to
to make myself happy

thinking back to childhood memories
of playing house and being a dad
with my friend across the street
imagining what it would be like
to be an adult
Never realizing that
I'd reach 37
and still feel like I don't know
what it should feel like
to be an adult

Sitting here thinking
that  I've made so many strides forward
in the past 8 years
but even though I was moving forward
wondering if I haven't moved fast enough
and that I have lost the chance
to find love
and to be a father

The clock ticks, and I realize it's past 1
and I'm sitting here
wondering if writing things down
will help me move on the path faster
or if I'm still wasting time


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #216 on: October 08, 2007, 09:32:19 pm »
Wasting Time

_______________________

Sitting alone by the computer
as the clock ticks by the minutes
I am being kept company
by the refridgerator
as it's moter drones on and on
and I wonder
how much of my life I've wasted
trying to be what others wanted
and not doing what I needed to
to make myself happy

thinking back to childhood memories
of playing house and being a dad
with my friend across the street
imagining what it would be like
to be an adult
Never realizing that
I'd reach 37
and still feel like I don't know
what it should feel like
to be an adult

Sitting here thinking
that  I've made so many strides forward
in the past 8 years
but even though I was moving forward
wondering if I haven't moved fast enough
and that I have lost the chance
to find love
and to be a father

The clock ticks, and I realize it's past 1
and I'm sitting here
wondering if writing things down
will help me move on the path faster
or if I'm still wasting time


So now a year later, if you were to write this poem, what say you?

(Yes this is a challenge!)
"It was only you in my life, and it will always be only you, Jack, I swear."

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #217 on: October 08, 2007, 09:43:03 pm »
So now a year later, if you were to write this poem, what say you?

(Yes this is a challenge!)


Ohhhhh....I love a challenge.

Challenge accepted, 9:42.


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #218 on: October 08, 2007, 09:54:00 pm »
Tru, Challenge answered, 9:54 pm








Wasting Time- Chapter 2

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Sitting alone by the computer
as the clock ticks by the minutes
I am being kept company
by the hum of the modem
and the occasional "beep" of my YIM system
while I carry on conversation
and put my thoughts onto my blog

So much has changed since "chapter 1"
and it can be surprising
how what was so important to you before
can seem so insingificant now
and make you question
your thought processes and priorities

I find my feelings of fatherhood to have disappeared
and the appeal of travel taking importance
seeing the world instead of
setting up home
and wanting the freedom to go as I please
without having to worry about the care of a young one

I know I have not missed out on love
had it in my life before
much to my surprise
and I know i will have it again
it will be mine, and I'll hold it with both hands
tight enough not to lose it
but gentle enough not to bruise it.

My writing is taking shape and form
but I still question if it is ready to be seen
and if there is an audience for it
and if I have the talent to put it out there
and the strength to face the rejection that will come
wondering if I should've started this much earlier
instead of at almost 40.

I've accomplished much in the past 2 years
more than I thought was possible
but I feel that a part of me
will never be satisfied with that
and always convinced that
I waste too much time


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Cellar Scribblings
« Reply #219 on: October 08, 2007, 09:59:19 pm »
Quote
Paralyzer by Finger Eleven.
Not my style of music but oddly enough, I really like it! ;D
"The biggest obstacle to most of us achieving our dreams isn't reality, it's our own fear"

"Saint Paul had his Epiphany on the road to Damascus, Mine was on Brokeback Mountain"