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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #270 on: July 12, 2008, 06:59:05 pm »
can you stand more?

http://louisev.livejournal.com/272553.html  'Chapter 59'
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #271 on: July 12, 2008, 08:27:10 pm »
SPOILERS






You sneaky Louise, you!  You reeled us right in, didn't you?   I thought it might be Wayne - but usually he's calling about something stupid like mice!  PI's? I didn't see that coming at all.  Damn.  Good thing they already had Colson's "intervention."  And the grade-A fancy mansex x 2.

I'm trying really hard to think that it's not what I think it is, but I'm not succeeding very well........Well done, Louise - thanks!

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #272 on: July 12, 2008, 10:44:14 pm »
hahahah Marie, can I outthink you?  That is the question!

And I figured since I have been so remiss recently - being a reader rather than a writer, that I should somehow make up for it.

I am hoping to do some more writing tomorrow and not leave you all in such suspense!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #273 on: July 12, 2008, 10:52:02 pm »
hahahah Marie, can I outthink you?  That is the question!

And I figured since I have been so remiss recently - being a reader rather than a writer, that I should somehow make up for it.

I am hoping to do some more writing tomorrow and not leave you all in such suspense!

Louise, I don't have any doubt that you can outthink me!  LOL!  More tomorrow?  Yay! 

Thanks!
Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #274 on: July 13, 2008, 01:14:41 pm »
ok now did I manage to outthink anybody?  heheheh

Chapter 60:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/272882.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #275 on: July 14, 2008, 08:09:16 am »
ok now did I manage to outthink anybody?  heheheh

Chapter 60:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/272882.html

*waves hand*  Yep, you outthought me!  A great surprise to see Jeremy.  I've missed him!  Jeremy was stoic about being shot in the chest, and he didn't hesitate before jumping into a burning car to save a life, but ringing Ellery and Colson's doorbell when he knows he's probably "interrupting" them?  Now, that's courage! LOL!  Poor Jeremy. 

And why do I think Colson calling Laura is a very bad idea?

Thanks, Louise!
Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #276 on: July 14, 2008, 10:49:53 am »
it"s always a very bad idea!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #277 on: July 19, 2008, 05:16:39 pm »
and here is chapter 61!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/272951.html 
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #278 on: July 19, 2008, 06:30:29 pm »
SPOILERS







Louise, you totally rock!!!!  LOL!  How many times will I be saying 'I didn't see that coming!"  I didn't think Laura sent the PI's - too obvious - but I never would have guessed Steve, and I really wouldn't have guessed what he was thinking!

“Not half as excitin as your life with Colson, Chief. I swear.” 

You said it, Jeremy! Although, I know they could both do with less excitement of that kind. 

But.....where does this leave Laura?  It appears that her husband is not only cheating on her, he's conspiring against her - and not only in her imagination.  She really does appear to be alone in the world.

Great job, Louise - thanks!

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
« Reply #279 on: July 19, 2008, 08:19:07 pm »
I figured I must have really out-thought you on that one, Marie! heheh.

But that is a very good question - where does that leave Laura?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”