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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #10 on: September 22, 2008, 07:48:27 am »
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I don't know which I love more - a wet, naked and horny Ellery or a nervous, blushing and horny Mr. Coyote!   :)  I'll take them both. 

“We’re ... all set. Know how ta turn down the bed an all that.”

LOL!  Can't argue with that. Terrific dialogue, as always, Louise, and having Colson in California is inspired!

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Marie

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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #11 on: September 22, 2008, 01:59:22 pm »
I hope that you all like it... I had to get away from all of those murders and court procedures and such and get back to what really counts... the actual drama of the Wrangler and the Lawman.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #12 on: September 22, 2008, 02:26:46 pm »
Yeah, I love it! Although when I first read the title, I thought they were heading out east. LOL. I didn't know about 'the land of the lotus eaters'.

And what's a Tesla coil?  ???

I love Ellery giving Wes a call before they take off. I remember Ellery being shocked when Colson told him about Wes and Edna regarding him a their son, but he enjoys a bit of daddying now and again, even though he'll probably never admit it. It's nice to see Ellery seeking a bit of reassurance from Wes.

And Wes, well, what can I say? I love Wes!!

“Have fun boy. Just don’t gimme the details.”   :laugh:

How wonderful that Wes and Edna have invited Nick and Jeremy to do the sunday roast. I'm already looking forward to both of them riding with the Grey girls.  ;D



I don't know which I love more - a wet, naked and horny Ellery or a nervous, blushing and horny Mr. Coyote!   :)  I'll take them both. 



hmmm, I hear you Marie. It's an impossible choice.  :P


What a great start Louise! More please.  :D

Dank u wel!!
'We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em'

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #13 on: September 22, 2008, 05:48:11 pm »
here is a Tesla coil, invented of course by Nikola Tesla:



It generates static electricity.  LOTS of static electricity.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2008, 08:22:16 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #15 on: September 26, 2008, 07:36:23 am »
Aw, poor Colson ....  but I love the hair combing idea, of course  :) .  And Ellery does know how to handle his man. 

Actually, I've been in hotels where I have .... err... heard quite clearly the activies going on in the next room (but don't tell Colson that!   ;)   )

“If I’m wrong, then what?”

“Then I’m on top next time.”


Looks like Colson can't lose!   :laugh:

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Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #16 on: September 26, 2008, 11:59:58 am »
“I got an itch only you can scratch, boy, an if that’s what it takes ...”


OMG, that's one for the books Louise!  :laugh:  Fantastic dialogue, as always.


And searching a hotel room? Now that brings back memories...


I'm loving this, thanks Louise!  :)
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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #17 on: September 26, 2008, 02:03:13 pm »
And searching a hotel room? Now that brings back memories...

Oh, it sure does .... last time they were searching for a wedding ring.  This time they're wearing wedding rings!  :D
But that spark of electricity is still there, stronger than ever!

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #18 on: September 26, 2008, 06:49:50 pm »
heheheheh yes searching a hotel room... what memories!

I am going out tonight to a presidential debate party, but I will be back tomorrow in full 'search' mode!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #19 on: September 27, 2008, 03:39:39 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”