Author Topic: Brokeback Haiku  (Read 22731 times)

moremojo

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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
« Reply #10 on: April 19, 2006, 09:00:25 pm »
Bracing wind, tent flap
Sheltering two boys inside
Finding each other.

Scott
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Re: Haiku
« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2006, 06:55:33 pm »
Mouth gaping, blood red
Staining desert sage gully
Love's terrible price.

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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
« Reply #12 on: April 28, 2006, 12:06:36 am »
You said it...








mmmm. pretty girl...(this was right after I got the idea for "Good Old Boy")
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
« Reply #13 on: May 01, 2006, 07:06:46 pm »
Shirts entwined, repose
Hidden in trailer corner
Gathering dust, love.

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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
« Reply #14 on: May 01, 2006, 08:12:01 pm »
Lightning Flat prairie
Scorched grass sighing in the wind
Weeds will hold my love.

And sleeping, the boys
Gather warmth from their bodies
Clasping chilled fingers.

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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
« Reply #15 on: May 02, 2006, 12:26:45 am »
I write a story--
ugliness pours from me like
pus from a wound..why?

I had to find some
 hideous thing in this great
field of beauty, dreams.
« Last Edit: May 02, 2006, 12:50:07 am by julie01 »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
« Reply #16 on: May 04, 2006, 12:37:21 am »
I write a sexless
story-- I'll start the next
with an orgasm

all these paper folk
who have become celluloid--
I love them so  much
« Last Edit: May 04, 2006, 12:40:10 am by julie01 »
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #17 on: May 06, 2006, 08:47:14 pm »
Jack, Ennis, frozen
in an Ang Lee ice storm-- we
sweat the sun of hate

"I'm neautral toward fags;
don't want to see your pictures
teach it to my kid."
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2006, 09:48:45 pm »
Mountain postcard, slid
In place by love-trembling hands
Lost green days of youth.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2006, 10:09:50 pm »
Recent discoveries:


The truck pulls out--she
 lifts her hand from baby's head,
 and waves to no one

You breathe as quickly
as I, , yet you hide your mouth--
I want to kiss you.

and do not think, when
you take you hand back, that I
will  let it  go.
« Last Edit: July 09, 2006, 04:29:15 am by julie01 »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters