Author Topic: Brokeback Haiku  (Read 22961 times)

Offline jessiwrite

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #70 on: September 21, 2006, 01:30:50 pm »

He couldn't forget
till found he could, defined sad,
Damned, cried, breathed regret.

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... not nobody when in somebody's arms,  ain’t nowhere if somewhere with him.
My man who nothin ever came t’is hand the way he wanted.
‘Cause all he ever wanted was me.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #71 on: September 21, 2006, 10:56:02 pm »
S'right, won't matter
Don't have to call it nothn.
Ain't foolin your heart.
 
... not nobody when in somebody's arms,  ain’t nowhere if somewhere with him.
My man who nothin ever came t’is hand the way he wanted.
‘Cause all he ever wanted was me.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #72 on: October 03, 2006, 05:19:43 pm »
Tired, aching joints
Reminders of worker's due
Payment in stillness

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #73 on: November 05, 2006, 11:57:24 pm »
Eyes
Blue eyes reflect; brown
give out warmth. Black eyes absorb
all--how much it hurts!

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When you jack-off, no
one iknows your fantasies.
Who needs to know!

Man,. woman, beast,
 angel, devil--=and you can dress
the same tomorrow!
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #74 on: November 20, 2006, 11:42:50 pm »
very early Fellini

Didja ever walk
a rail, arms  out, so as not
to lose your balance?
« Last Edit: December 01, 2006, 11:15:25 pm by twistedude »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #75 on: November 27, 2006, 08:54:19 pm »
That fella love you?
Damn straight; soft hand and swift knee
Kindled heart's blue flame.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #76 on: December 11, 2006, 04:23:44 pm »
Memory's gray shade
Dims the brightness of life lived
Renders present void.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #77 on: January 24, 2007, 11:31:56 am »
Fly on greasy spoon
Heedless from sudden riches
Of swaying tent flap.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #78 on: February 11, 2007, 05:20:45 pm »
Now one year later
Treading paths unfamiliar
Seeking the true self.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #79 on: March 13, 2007, 03:56:27 pm »
Ennui loosens fear
Of uncertain choices, change;
Life forges ahead.