As promised...
Chapter 4: http://louisev.livejournal.com/289049.html
SPOILERSLouise, I find this story so compelling. I really like your use of the stream of consciousness mode. It's very effective, and the way we learn about Henry through his interactions with, and observations of, Wes and Ellery was very well done. I liked that Henry noted he can sometimes learn more about people from observing and interacting than he can from "testing." Obviously, Henry won't be "testing" Colson, but I know he'll be watching him closely when they do meet!
So Ellery has already had his meeting with Henry....not a surprise that he found his time with Ellery so interesting b/c Ellery
is interesting, and I found his reaction to the "Boy with Violin" card fascinating!
Ellery Cantrell is not his employee. He’s his sonYou've got that right, Henry. Watching Wes through Henry's eyes was so touching b/c we know the depth of his feelings and how much self-control he's demonstrating.
Stellar writing, Louise. It's clear you feel energized!
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Thanks,
Marie