Author Topic: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale  (Read 67548 times)

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #200 on: May 04, 2009, 01:48:40 am »
Bonus chapter 58!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/303115.html


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Well, at this rate, Ellery's headaches aren't going to subside any time soon.  :-\ Jeremy's right, Ellery should be smelling flowers and watching tv instead of trying to solve crimes, past and present from his hospital bed.

I know, I know, I sound like Edna, but what can I say? I want our boys home soon making kissy faces!  :)

It's amazing how fast the updates are popping up, Louise. Great job!  :)
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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #201 on: May 04, 2009, 01:02:11 pm »
Bonus chapter 58!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/303115.html

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“So just outta curiosity, how come Joe is goin through the archives lookin at cold cases from 1971 an havin long secret talks with Wes on the phone?” Jeremy asked. “Speakin a secrets...”

Ellery blanched. “He’s doin what?”


Uh oh.  I think Ellery's headache is about to get much worse, and I think Wes is about to get one himself.  Thanks, Louise!
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #202 on: May 04, 2009, 06:29:23 pm »
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“So just outta curiosity, how come Joe is goin through the archives lookin at cold cases from 1971 an havin long secret talks with Wes on the phone?” Jeremy asked. “Speakin a secrets...”

Ellery blanched. “He’s doin what?”


Uh oh.  I think Ellery's headache is about to get much worse, and I think Wes is about to get one himself.  Thanks, Louise!

yes, definitely!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #203 on: May 04, 2009, 09:50:00 pm »
and a little showdown!

Chapter 60!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/303427.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #204 on: May 05, 2009, 12:27:51 pm »
and a little showdown!

Chapter 60!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/303427.html

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Yes, a little showdown, but quite touching.  It's hard for anyone to think clearly when they care so damn much.  And, no, Ellery is a lot of things, but never a crybaby.  But he really does need to go home and be loved by Colson and give his poor abused brain a chance to heal instead of being constantly picked at. 

An Colson half convinced I got some deep dark secret a hetrosexuality or somethin I’m keepin from em,” ..

Well, thank God we know it's not that bad!!!  :laugh: :laugh:  Yes, even with a cracked brain he's still Ellery!  Thanks, Louise.
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #205 on: May 05, 2009, 01:55:41 pm »
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Yes, a little showdown, but quite touching.  It's hard for anyone to think clearly when they care so damn much.  And, no, Ellery is a lot of things, but never a crybaby.  But he really does need to go home and be loved by Colson and give his poor abused brain a chance to heal instead of being constantly picked at. 

An Colson half convinced I got some deep dark secret a hetrosexuality or somethin I’m keepin from em,” ..

Well, thank God we know it's not that bad!!!  :laugh: :laugh:  Yes, even with a cracked brain he's still Ellery!  Thanks, Louise.

Being attracted to women or having sex with them truly IS one of the worst calamities Ellery can imagine befalling him.  The most fun I ever had with that aspect of his personality was when he had the pulled rib and was trying to watch porn in the Holiday Inn and the woman kept blocking his view of the man and it just wouldn't work for him.

I really do like how this story is turning out.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #206 on: May 05, 2009, 02:18:00 pm »
Being attracted to women or having sex with them truly IS one of the worst calamities Ellery can imagine befalling him. 

Oh, God, ain't that the truth! 

The most fun I ever had with that aspect of his personality was when he had the pulled rib and was trying to watch porn in the Holiday Inn and the woman kept blocking his view of the man and it just wouldn't work for him.

 :laugh: :laugh:  It was a lot of fun to read, too, Louise!  I remember that so well -  Wes called him right in the middle of it and, of course, it was another one of those "I didn't need to know that, Ellery!" moments!

I really do like how this story is turning out.

You're not alone - I can tell that your readers are having a great time with this!   
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #207 on: May 05, 2009, 02:55:37 pm »


 :laugh: :laugh:  It was a lot of fun to read, too, Louise!  I remember that so well -  Wes called him right in the middle of it and, of course, it was another one of those "I didn't need to know that, Ellery!" moments!

You're not alone - I can tell that your readers are having a great time with this!   

hehehehe good times.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #208 on: May 05, 2009, 03:10:51 pm »

 :laugh: :laugh:  It was a lot of fun to read, too, Louise!  I remember that so well -  Wes called him right in the middle of it and, of course, it was another one of those "I didn't need to know that, Ellery!" moments!


That was a hilarious scene Louise. Ellery was telling Wes that he was watching 'normal people porn' or something like that.  :laugh:  :laugh: :laugh:
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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #209 on: May 05, 2009, 03:59:03 pm »
That was a hilarious scene Louise. Ellery was telling Wes that he was watching 'normal people porn' or something like that.  :laugh:  :laugh: :laugh:

This won't be the end of Ellery telling Wes things he just doesn't want to know!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”