Author Topic: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale  (Read 66802 times)

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #230 on: May 13, 2009, 12:13:11 pm »
they sure were blurry!!!!

And now, chapter 67!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/305601.html


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Uh oh.  Batten down the hatches for Hurricane Wayne! LOL.  But Colson's right, he just might be a distraction.  Lord knows he'd be change of pace from the nurses and doctors.  I hope Ellery is awake when Wes does get there - that should be an interesting conversation!

And a swooping, hovering Colson is adorable - and, yep, even "sweet."   :) Thanks, Louise.
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #231 on: May 13, 2009, 01:38:21 pm »
he doesn't like being called sweet though... it impugns his manliness!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #232 on: May 14, 2009, 12:28:39 am »
okay it took quite a while, due to being very distracted by a myriad of other silly things, but here's chapter 69!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/305760.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #233 on: May 14, 2009, 12:56:34 pm »
okay it took quite a while, due to being very distracted by a myriad of other silly things, but here's chapter 69!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/305760.html

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Whoa...I did not see that coming!  And things were complicated enough when they thought they at least knew the players!   :-\ 

Go easy on Ellery but remember – under that cracked skull he’s still Ellery an he ain’t helpin much right now.”

LOL.  That's exactly what I thought when Ellery said that Joe could come over as long as Ellery was the one asking the questions.  Thanks, Louise!
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #234 on: May 14, 2009, 02:10:55 pm »
I have not lost the element of surprise I see.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #235 on: May 14, 2009, 11:37:46 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #236 on: May 15, 2009, 07:20:44 pm »
and now...

chapter 70!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/305974.html


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Mabel is a lovely person.  It's not unusual for women to sometimes think they can change a man or save him from himself; but, of course,no one person can ever "change" another person.   It's been interesting to watch Wesley interact with both Bates and Mabel.  He has good instincts and a direct, but non-combative manner that helps him get the information he needs.  And, of course, he's a naturally compassionate person.   As the Fearless Leader, he's a fine example for his men.   And now he has the address book!  Thanks, Louise.
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #237 on: May 16, 2009, 01:46:11 am »
I neglected to post that I was out watching Star Trek tonight and so missed my writing window.  But I have very little to do this weekend except get prepped for moving to Chicago... so I'll unavoidably be doing more writing tomorrow!!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #238 on: May 16, 2009, 05:22:58 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #239 on: May 16, 2009, 10:45:50 pm »
and bonus Saturday chapter 72:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/306586.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”