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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #50 on: October 12, 2006, 07:00:01 pm »
This is the Modern Way, Chapter Seven: Break the Night with Colour is now up. :)

http://1-of-one.livejournal.com/27683.html
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Offline littleguitar

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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #51 on: October 12, 2006, 09:04:46 pm »
yay!!  ;D

I'll be reading it tonight!
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‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #52 on: October 17, 2006, 10:59:26 am »
This is the Modern Way, Chapter Eight: Perfect Day is now up.  :)

http://1-of-one.livejournal.com/13299.html
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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #53 on: October 19, 2006, 04:23:01 am »
Oooh, we're almost getting to the new parts, aren't we? *excited*

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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #54 on: October 19, 2006, 09:54:01 am »
Quote from: Sheera on October 19, 2006, 04:23:01 am
Oooh, we're almost getting to the new parts, aren't we? *excited*

:)

YES!! Next week, a whole new chapter!!

*SQUEEE*

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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #55 on: October 19, 2006, 10:05:05 am »
Quote from: one_of_one on October 17, 2006, 10:59:26 am
This is the Modern Way, Chapter Eight: Perfect Day is now up.  :)

http://1-of-one.livejournal.com/13299.html

I love Perfect Day by Lou Reed... what a great song and a great way to start the chapter  :D
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‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #56 on: October 23, 2006, 04:31:41 pm »
Modern Way Chapter Nine: High  http://1-of-one.livejournal.com/29814.html

Modern Way is scheduled to have 18 chapters and an epilogue.  Yes, I am organised for once in my life!  It will be posted (hopefully) every six days from now until 22nd December.  There will also be a fanmix of the songs available from then, too.

Happy reading!
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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #57 on: October 23, 2006, 05:56:19 pm »
This chapter had soo many truly beautiful moments, I could just quote the entire chapter. I loved the warm sweetness of them lying in bed together,Jack touching Ennis so lovingly and joking around about Ennis dancing at the club.
I loved the image of them making love all the time, loved how Ennis couldn't keep his hands off Jack.
I loved Jack telling Ennis that he's always sexy, omfg - how special is that...
I loved these lines from those BEAUTIFUL special parts on the dance floor that just took my breath away:

And sweet, sweet lips against his own. He tasted something that felt like fresh mountain air in Ennis's mouth. Then they were floating back down, like autumn leaves swirling from branch to ground. They rested on the earth, came back to the present.

And Ennis whispering  yeah to it being serious.......oh wow, nearly made me cry. I just feel like he's really getting there, or at least trying soo hard to.
I love Helen's Jack and Ennis, so so much. MW gets me good, each and every chapter  :)
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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #58 on: October 24, 2006, 12:19:40 am »
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And Ennis whispering  yeah to it being serious.......oh wow, nearly made me cry. I just feel like he's really getting there, or at least trying soo hard to.
I love Helen's Jack and Ennis, so so much. MW gets me good, each and every chapter 

That "yeah" was just great wasn't it? I loved this chapter so much and I'm right there with you, Helen's Jack and Ennis are so so good. Thanks for the update!
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‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Fanfiction by Helen (1_of_one on LJ)
« Reply #59 on: October 24, 2006, 02:17:58 pm »
Hey ya Helen, I am going back to the beginning and reading "Modern Way" from the start, and something brought me up short.

He grabbed his wash bag in an angry movement and stamped into the shower room.


What's a wash bag?
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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