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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #180 on: February 10, 2010, 01:10:03 am »
 
and back to High Drama Central at the Prairie Apartments:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/334260.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #181 on: February 10, 2010, 05:20:50 pm »
SPOILERS






Okay, I'm in a bit of a hurry, but I had to stop in long enough to say, "Holy Fuck!!!!!" And, maybe I should have - but I did not see that coming!






The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #182 on: February 10, 2010, 06:33:47 pm »
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Okay, I'm in a bit of a hurry, but I had to stop in long enough to say, "Holy Fuck!!!!!" And, maybe I should have - but I did not see that coming!









hahahahah.  With a little luck and a lot of ambition I'll be writing again tonight!  I'm trying to divide my creative 'juices'between this book and the short novel Ëmpire of Hermes - but you know, my short novels never EVER end up short!

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #183 on: February 13, 2010, 07:35:21 pm »
I just finished a half-day-long contemplative writing in "Hermes"and am now getting back to the Byzantine Crapola.  Since I'm going to be quite occupied tomorrow with other things, tonight is Ellery Night!  Stay tuned.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #184 on: February 13, 2010, 10:08:07 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #185 on: February 15, 2010, 03:01:03 am »
now I'm just spoiling you all again.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/334768.html

Chapter 48
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #186 on: February 15, 2010, 02:40:53 pm »
Life's been crazy for me lately, but finding two chapters to read makes me  :D !



SPOILERS






“ Eagleton? Is this nightmare ever gonna end?”

Took the words right out of my mouth, Ellery! 


“I’ll tell em. Ellery Wesley said I should pack yer jammies. Wesley, Ellery says he sleeps butt naked, I’m hangin up now.”

 :laugh: :laugh:  I always feel better as long as Ellery is still telling Wes things he doesn't need to know.

But I don't like those stabbing pains in Wesley's chest!!  He's the Fearless Leader!  And what in heck is he going to say to Katie?  Man oh man, Louise . . . what a story!
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #187 on: February 15, 2010, 03:50:05 pm »
Yeah... it tends to be that way doesn't it?

But I'm the groove, and we have to lead up to the big showdown between Ellery and Esteban, don't we?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #188 on: February 20, 2010, 11:17:17 am »
And now... back to Tourmaline for the exciting conclusion of...

hheheheh just kidding.

I am working on the next chapter(s) though.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #189 on: February 20, 2010, 01:38:42 pm »
And here it is.
 
More chaos at Memorial.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/335065.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”