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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #210 on: February 28, 2010, 07:40:32 pm »
SPOILERS



omg, there is no way out of this for Stevens.  He's in for a long wait if he thinks his brethren are going to run in and try to save his ass.  And it's an understatement to say that Esteban is on shaky ground, too. Wow - what a terrifically written scene that was.

Ellery next?  Yay!! Everything is better with some Ellery!  


Heheheh thanks Marie.  I had to think long and hard about Stevens before writing that chapter, to get into his wormy little applecore of a mind.

yup, Ellery I am writing tonight. i had to get into the right - um, how shall we say - frame of mind, in the right - how shall we say - pain level :)
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #211 on: February 28, 2010, 10:12:53 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #212 on: March 04, 2010, 04:22:36 am »
a new chapter is under construction!!! i didn't get it finished but I did get it started!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #213 on: March 05, 2010, 01:09:56 am »
 
And here 'tis!

Chapter 55:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/336886.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #214 on: March 07, 2010, 11:40:14 am »
 
New chapter!  yes, hard to believe!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/337003.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #215 on: March 13, 2010, 11:20:51 am »
 
"Agents of the Law" resumes - today.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #216 on: March 13, 2010, 07:22:32 pm »
for some odd reason - this took ALL DAY.

Chapter 57:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/337278.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #217 on: March 14, 2010, 10:44:53 pm »
and the sniveling and begging got me to produce the next chapter.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/337572.html  chapter 58
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #218 on: March 20, 2010, 10:14:01 am »
Okay so are y'all ready for the mind-blowing final chapter?

No, I didn't think so.

I'm working on ch 59 as we speak.

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #219 on: March 20, 2010, 11:51:33 am »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”