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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #240 on: April 23, 2010, 05:04:13 am »
Okay I finally eked out chapter 68!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/339969.html

I'll be travelling this weekend but lapping up all the praise I can get! hahahah.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #241 on: April 27, 2010, 10:14:05 am »
Okay I very nearly finished chapter 69 but my roommate talked me into henna'ing my hair and that was it for last night, so chapter 69 will be up sometime shortly after work ends today!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #242 on: April 27, 2010, 10:32:41 pm »
 
And at long last!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/340228.html

Chapter 69. I may edit it later, it seems somehow... lumpy.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #243 on: May 01, 2010, 02:34:54 pm »
I have gotten past my "lumpy"judgement and pronounced that chapter good.

Now is anyone ready for more story?  Working on it now!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #244 on: May 01, 2010, 08:35:02 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #245 on: May 03, 2010, 02:12:46 am »
and as promised, chapter 71!

We're getting close to a wrap here!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/340991.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #246 on: May 15, 2010, 11:02:09 pm »
anybody ready for another chapter?

Because I think I'm ready to write one!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #247 on: May 16, 2010, 02:55:59 am »
and here it is!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/341332.html  Chapter 72
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #248 on: May 24, 2010, 10:16:13 am »
Believe it or not, I am working on determining the end-point of "Agents of the Law" - which naturally, has a follow-on cliffhanger.

Will Little Nell er Wayne die or will he, Lazarus-like, pull through once again?  Will Ellery wake up and be sane again?  Or will he fly to Tahiti?  Will he stay "quit" ?  And what happened to Pam?  Will Katie get charged with assault with a dangerous weapon?  Will Joe get to meet the shady Emilio Lago and face down Ellery's would-be killer - his FIRST would-be killer, that is?

But perhaps most importantly - is Dr. Sampson going to pull through from his injuries?

And is Lewis Stevens going to survive emergency surgery?  Is Pedro Sanchez ever going to show up for work to relieve Joe?

All this and more in the upcoming sequel to "Agents" - but as soon as I catch up on sleep and my stomach settles down I'll be able to write the final chapters of this volume.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
« Reply #249 on: June 01, 2010, 04:17:29 pm »
Okay folks, so now that Upgrade Hell has been downgraded to an optimistic "Heck" it looks like I'm going to have mental space to deal with completing this book.

I'm going to be leaving work in a bit, going to stop at UPS and the Post Office to send some things off that I don't need to be dragging around Idaho with me, and then ... dumdumdum...
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”