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vkm91941

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Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« on: April 02, 2006, 08:19:23 pm »
Daniel has not picked up his PM yet to join us here but I thought I would bring his lovely creative spirit here with us by re-posting his beautiful original poetry.

Do not let me go into that dark night
By Daniel

Do not let me go into that dark night
Alone and cold in frozen moonlight
The tiny fire burns inside
Alive and warm, yet so far away
I can hardly wait for light of day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Isolated and distant from your sight
Let me stay by your side
Together and ever in romantic play
Night after night, day after day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Lonely and hurt without your delight
Come along for the ride
Loving and joyful will we ever stay
I rely on you so much, as the sun of the day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Sad and despairing because of your plight
In everything, I've never lied
Happy and hopeful, please come away
I am here for you, let's seize the day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Patient but hopeful, I feel your fright
It rushes over me like a rising tide
Yearning and insistent; come away, come away
Tomorrow can be a brand new day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Present and willing, let me be your might
But yet you still push me aside
Absent and resistant, have you nothing to say?
I fear the night but you hide in the day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Wanting, desiring with painful insight
This dark heat to which I'm tied
Avoiding, escaping your tragic play
I too am now silent in the day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Loving, deserving of love's height
I must from time to time abide
Hating, hurting myself this way
But it's something I need every day

Do not let me go into that dark night
Cold and alone. Its just not right
There is no greater divide
Warm and willing, but you had to wait
Now, dear friend, it is too late

I won't let you go into that dark night
Final and lasting, I see with your light
Over lost ashes I have cried
Renewing and eternal, I swear if I may
My love for you outshines the day.


« Last Edit: April 02, 2006, 09:39:54 pm by vkm91941 »

vkm91941

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2006, 08:20:08 pm »
But...
By Daniel


I'm here, I'm here!
His eyes laugh out
His lips aquiver with glee
But I barely twist my mouth
I just stand there silently.

I'm away from the truck
With a sideways glance
An anxious look crosses my face
But his grin reflects perennial dance
His quick movement closing space.

He smiles, he nods
His eyes meet mine
So full of hope and dreams
But I look away just in time
Nothing is what it seems.

With sour note
And bitter taste
I explain the situation
But his eyes dim with sudden haste
I face my own damnation.

His eyebrows sink
His smile fades
He blinks and looks away
But I say nothing to his face
There's nothing I can say.

He twists away
I feel him turn
A sharp and pulsing ache
But I still have so much to learn
Of love for love's sake.

Bereft, alone
I apologize
Yet knowing he'll be back
But tears well up in his eyes
My darling, darling Jack.

With tenderness
And sweet sorrow
He utters his goodbyes
But I never saw tomorrow
Nor thought that he might die.
« Last Edit: April 07, 2006, 02:41:15 am by vkm91941 »

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2006, 08:20:50 pm »
How Often
by Daniel

How often I have hoped for
A moment such as this
When moon with silver light
Shines down upon our kiss!

How often have you pulled away
From this sacred embrace
And walked away, not looking back
With a halting, shambling pace?

How often I have called your
Name in the middle of the night
And Felt the pain of loneliness
Without you in my sight.

How often have you looked aside
And tried to hide your fears
Unwilling to address them
Growing them over the years?

How often I have have needed you
And burned with heated fire
Aching for even a single touch
From you, my heart's desire.

How often has your need for me
Been still and taciturn
When all I wanted was
To be needed in return?

How often I have wept clear tears
The blood of my heart's pain
Washing away the salty sorrow
With unfounded hope again.

How often have you pushed me back
self-hating and afraid?
I've tried to offer solace
You've turned away in shame.

How often has our love been
so totally ignored?
How often have we refused what
could sweetly be in store?
How often has swung open then closed
opportunity's door?
I can't count, can't stand it anymore.


vkm91941

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2006, 08:21:27 pm »
Lonely
By Daniel

Lonely
One string vibrates
Silent on its own
Tantalized by thoughts of more

Two strings harmonize
One song, two hearts

Laughter fades in purest joy
Over time and through stunning light
Vexed by hatred's bigotry
Ending never agony's plight
Damned if you do, and damned if you don't

Two songs melt together
On the wide and open plains

Lonely
Only together
Sorrow in their happiness
Taken in brief moments

A gentleness fades in harsh respect
Glumping in the throat
As agony erupts in violence
In extreme pain we now reflect
Now that silence has passed us by

EnnisDelMar

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2006, 08:21:50 pm »
Yes! I really like Daniel's poetry, why isn't he here?

vkm91941

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2006, 08:23:38 pm »
My sincere hope is that he will decide to join us, but as yet he has not picked up his PM and has not been on the IMDb in a the last week.. Maybe he got to someplace nice for Spring Break?

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #6 on: April 03, 2006, 02:10:56 pm »
I'm glad to see that he is a member here.  I've been wondering where our sage Daniel has been.  :)
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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2006, 06:10:02 am »
bumping so hopefully Daniel will see we have his poems here safe with us :)

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2006, 10:49:55 am »
Bumping again. Daniel, have you seen this?

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Re: Breathtaking Original Poetry by our own Sunmoonstars
« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2006, 02:24:15 am »
bumping again in hopes Daniel will see
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