Author Topic: New Story: The Runaway Deputy  (Read 84593 times)

Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« on: July 11, 2010, 09:33:46 pm »
And now the opening of the sequel to 'Agents of the Law'

The Runaway Deputy  http://louisev.livejournal.com/343965.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2010, 02:16:51 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline souxi

  • BetterMost 1000+ Posts Club
  • ******
  • Posts: 1,300
  • sex on legs
    • bats belfrey
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2010, 03:02:10 pm »
My word Ellery is hot and horny today.  :laugh: So he wants to be a Lawyer eh? Hmm, I dunno, I spose I could see that, but he'll always be a policeman at heart. Somehow I think he'll change his mind. Being in the force is in his blood. It's what he is. It's who Colson fell in love with. And besides, you don't get to wear fancy berets when your a Lawyer and we know how much Colson loves Ellery in that beret.  :laugh: Great opening chapter Louise. Poor Wes, must have been so embarassed.  :laugh:

Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2010, 03:05:03 pm »
My word Ellery is hot and horny today.  :laugh: So he wants to be a Lawyer eh? Hmm, I dunno, I spose I could see that, but he'll always be a policeman at heart. Somehow I think he'll change his mind. Being in the force is in his blood. It's what he is. It's who Colson fell in love with. And besides, you don't get to wear fancy berets when your a Lawyer and we know how much Colson loves Ellery in that beret.  :laugh: Great opening chapter Louise. Poor Wes, must have been so embarassed.  :laugh:

Ellery does that on purpose ya know ;0
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2010, 10:49:04 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #5 on: July 18, 2010, 05:37:55 pm »
and what comes after 2 - chapter 3 of course!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/344629.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #6 on: July 25, 2010, 10:30:07 pm »
i've been working on this darn chapter all day, so I hope it does the job!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/345075.html#cutid1
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2010, 03:49:03 pm »
finally back at the story!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/345138.html  Chapter 5!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 09:15:38 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


Offline louisev

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost Moderator
  • The BetterMost 10,000 Post Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 16,107
  • "My guns and amo!! Over my cold dead hands!!"
    • Fiction by Louise Van Hine
Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #9 on: August 19, 2010, 08:51:37 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”