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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #30 on: February 20, 2011, 06:10:33 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #31 on: March 08, 2011, 06:21:45 pm »
new chapter! and full of that man on man goodness!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/351285.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #32 on: April 09, 2011, 08:40:39 pm »
New chapter, new chapter!  Sorry for the delay!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/351627.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #33 on: May 08, 2011, 03:43:04 pm »
Yikes!  it's been a MONTH!

okay okay so I had things to do!

here's a new chapter with a plot development!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/351850.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #34 on: May 09, 2011, 07:52:53 pm »
another chapter, to bring my average back up!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/352139.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #35 on: May 23, 2011, 09:46:45 am »
Intermission and Cliff Notes:


http://louisev.livejournal.com/352453.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #36 on: May 23, 2011, 11:26:51 pm »
and the beginning of the explosive denouement to a plot arc 2 years in the making, yadda yadda yadda:

Chapter 33 of The Runaway Deputy

http://louisev.livejournal.com/352728.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #37 on: May 24, 2011, 09:33:19 pm »
and now aonther chapter!  yay!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/352919.html

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #38 on: June 12, 2011, 05:27:01 pm »
And onward and upward for the boys in Tourmaline:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/353153.html  Chapter 35
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Story: The Runaway Deputy
« Reply #39 on: June 12, 2011, 07:51:48 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”