Shakesthegrounds Rumblings

[Shakesthecoffecan]

Thin sips,
The anointed flask,
Had been our miricle,
Of the Loaves and the fishes.

And it came to us finally,
At the end of our pilgrimage,
What he felt that night,
Riding back to the sheep.

We pawed some white out of that moon,
With the blunt end of our hearts.

[southendmd]

Thin sips,
The anointed flask,
Had been our miricle,
Of the Loaves and the fishes.

And it came to us finally,
At the end of our pilgrimage,
What he felt that night,
Riding back to the sheep.

We pawed some white out of that moon,
With the blunt end of our hearts.

Moon-pawing,
Flask-raising,
Voice-soaring,
For the love of men.

[southendmd]

C'mon Paul, lets hear what you have to say.

Thanks, Tru, that was fun.   

Sorry, Scott, for butting in on your slam.

[Scott6373]

Thanks, Tru, that was fun.   

Sorry, Scott, for butting in on your slam.

Butt away

[Shakesthecoffecan]

Yes, indeed, this has been wonderful.
It is a beautiful day.

[ifyoucantfixit]

        This has been magical.  It may just be the best thing that has ever been done here....at(Bettermost)

I salute you all.  Such raw truth and talent.   Amazing.                thanks guys     

[Brokeback_Dev]

I name it dueling poems.. Simply the best read so far.

[moremojo]

Late but not lost
I accept the friend's invitation
To wander the open fields
Of love's delectation
Prose tends to slip away
But poetry remembers
The passion of our fire
When ought else has burnt to embers.

[southendmd]

I name it dueling poems.. Simply the best read so far.

How about "dancing" poems, Dev?

That was lovely, Scott.

[moremojo]

That was lovely, Scott.

Danke schön. Here is a link to a creative-writing thread I started (all poetry so far) on our 'Creative Writer's Corner':

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,13466.msg258771.html#msg258771