I tried the link and copied it to a Word doc, if you'd like me to send it, post or PM your email address.
thank you very much, butlers_fantasy, you made my day!!! read it in one sitting and may I say ''not bad...not bad at all''
still, I think Ennis in this fic is more shortstory-like than movie-like. actually the only thing I found slightly unrealistic was his openness in talking about feelings and stuff...
the way I always imagined the 'missing motel scene' in the movie was all about wordless passion, them breathlessly throwing themselves in each other's arms and not saying a damn word about it. i don't know. what do you guys make of it? sorry, i've not read other replies in this thread yet, I might be reinventing the wheel here