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Offline fernly

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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #3060 on: July 07, 2009, 02:29:25 pm »

For so long she'd done what she'd been taught to do, had kept the peace and yielded to his wishes, but she found that when she lost her child she had also lost that long-held habit.  And when she saw the look on his friend's face she knew it was time to do what she'd been planning since he'd first called.

Let him think he'd scored a victory by refusing the request.  She knew that the contents of the paper bag that Ennis clutched so tightly were more inherently a part of Jack than those cold ashes would ever be. 

Lovely, as always. Your drabbles cut right to the hearts of the characters, and your readers.
Thank you for this.
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