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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Luvlylittlewing:
Christmas Eve 1989 and Ennis Del Mar stood in front of his apartment door, his new keys in hand. He smiled for the first time in years as he thought of his two beautiful daughters and their Christmas gift to him: a fancy new place to live. Just last week Jr. walked into his trailer just as confident and cheerful as all get out, smiling from ear-to-ear. He didn’t interrupt her once as she told him how it was going to be from now on: he was to leave his dingy, depressing trailer and live in a newly built apartment complex not far from Jrs’ place.
Ennis didn’t say a word as his child described all that the new place had to offer: dazzling appointments such as hard wood floors, marble countertops in the kitchen, two bedrooms, walk-in closets. He didn’t believe a word of it – found it too good to be true. But when Alma Jr. and her sis practically kidnapped him and drove him to his new place, he felt he had no choice but to believe and accept. The girls got him out of his lease, and his son-in-law, who worked as a foreman on the construction crew, helped Jr. and Jenny buy the apartment for far below the market price. All Ennis had to do was pay his kids whatever he could afford per month.
Ennis entered his new digs and turned on the light. He scanned the living room and couldn’t believe his good fortune. He didn’t believe he deserved such luxury even though his life was a misery from the day he learned of Jack’s demise. Right now he walked over to his 4 foot Christmas tree, a gift from Alma Jr. and her husband. He fingered the truly flashy ornaments and saw nestled among the tinsel and lights a flashy ornament he’d not noticed before. Near the topper, the Christmas star, hung a sled drawn by a rodeo horse. Inside the sled was seated a tiny cowboy. Ennis very gently pulled the ornament from the branch where it hung. He fingered the tiny cowboy very gently, tenderly and smiled.
gwyllion:
Oh, that was so sweet!
I look forward to your next entry... maybe in 2014! LOL!
(((Luvlylittlewing)))
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday season :)
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Donna on December 12, 2012, 10:44:56 am ---Oh, that was so sweet!
I look forward to your next entry... maybe in 2014! LOL!
(((Luvlylittlewing)))
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday season :)
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I know! I know! I was bored watching the ending of "The Voice" last night and decided to write a few paragraphs. I'll have another entry up soon. Thanks for reading and commenting, Donna. I really appreciate it!
Happy Holidays to you!
dagi:
--- Quote from: Luvlylittlewing on April 13, 2009, 11:24:41 pm ---Jack watched Ennis soaping himself. Ennis was aware that Jack’s eyes were on him, and he had to be aware of his husband’s growing lust. Jack brought along a portable “shower” to hang from a tree branch or any place high, and he was glad he did. Ennis didn’t hesitate to use the shower after Jack strung it up. He stripped, gathered his soap and a loofah sponge and stood perfectly still as Jack turned the spigot. Ennis looked up as the spray coated and slicked his hair. Jack backed up in an effort to take in the tantalizing view.
Jack noticed that Ennis’ glorious body had not changed much over the years. If anything, Ennis’ bod was even better – sexier. Jack’s eyes grew wild as he took in Ennis’ firm, high buttocks. His butt cheeks were granite hard and smooth. Jack didn’t know how Ennis maintained his killer physique. Jack placed a hand on his own wide paunch, but he wasn’t ashamed that he was letting himself go. Ennis liked his spreading middle; he even remarked that Jack was giving him more to love.
Jack watched as Ennis turned his body under the spray. He was transported back to Brokeback when Ennis asked for a bit of hot water and washed everything he could reach. Jack had the self-control to avert his gaze then, but to look away was impossible now. Jack wondered how long he could stand it. Ennis noticed his lover’s torment and stepped from the steady stream of water. He moved closer to Jack and threw the soap and sponge aside. Jack ran into his arms, not caring a wit that he was getting very wet and very soapy.
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mmm Marie, I miss the good old times. I see you have been busy and your writing is delightful to read. Keep going!
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