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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

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Toycoon:
Howdy Cowboys and Cowgirls! Welcome to the exciting board game, Jack With Ennis in it's new home, BetterMost, Wyoming!

The rules to play are easy: Compose a steamy fanfic about Jack with Ennis in three sentences. The sentences can be as long or as short as you like but they should be grammatically correct. Now is your chance to reveal your innermost, personal desires for our favorite cowpokes. Make it hot and sexy!

Don't be shy and please put the title of your creation in the subject line so we can find the new story among the comments and assorted postings.

Toycoon:
He never was much for dancing, not much rhythm, but Ennis sure did like to watch Jack, shaking his butt and woopin' around while drinkin', listening to the transistor and sitting on the porch at Don Rowe's cabin under the full moon.

When Sam Cook came on over the radio, it was as though Jack had been electrocuted because he sprung up, yanked Ennis out of his chair and yelled, " This is my favorite song! "

Ennis was thankful it was a slow number because it gave him a chance to rub his smooth chest against Jack's hairy chest and find the rhythm that a full moon can coax out of a man.

THE WINGS:
Toycoon:  Simply beautiful!  I can just see the both of them, under the moon, enjoying some moments of complete bliss. 

Thanks for this!

THE WINGS  (Doug)

Dagi:
Toycoon, WHAT A START!

Thanks for that beautiful scene...I love Jack shaking his butt, and the image of our beloved boys embracing in a slow dance...meltingly beautiful!

Hi Gary, did you get my PM? How good to see you!

SUSIE where are you? Don´t tell me you missed the start! I´m yearning for your stories!

Dagi

Toycoon:

--- Quote --- Ennis gathered him up into his arms, “Jack Fu ckin Twist! Never figured you for a romantic fool!”
--- End quote ---

It's funny that we think of Jack as the romantic in the relationship, he saved the shirts and all, but I often think it's Ennis that is the more sentimental of the two. Ennis is the one that has the breakdown when Jack declares "Brokeback Mountain" as something in the past that they once had. Ennis, can't stop thinking about it.


--- Quote ---Jack Twist was right, no matter where they were, in this life or the next, they would always be together.
--- End quote ---

Gorgeous writing and so original, Susiebell, you Devil Doll! Very sweet of you to dedicate your first story to our boy, Gary.

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