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In Plain Sight by Victopet
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: mariez on October 06, 2007, 08:28:58 pm ---This is getting spooky, Mel! A couple weeks ago you hoped for CY and it appeared the next day ...and now..... Chapter 16!: :D
http://victopet.livejournal.com/16411.html?view=769307#t769307
Marie
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:o Really? Can't wait to get home and print it! :P
yb:
And another chapter is posted - chapter 17:
http://victopet.livejournal.com/16824.html
This chapter features the long-awaited moustache shaving scene, highly erotic and extremely well-written.
mariez:
--- Quote from: yb on October 07, 2007, 08:58:19 pm ---And another chapter is posted - chapter 17:
This chapter features the long-awaited moustache shaving scene, highly erotic and extremely well-written.
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Well written, indeed! There are many things I appreciate about this story, and one of the things I like the most is the author's way of showing Ennis's naivete in such a respectful way. We always see how smart Ennis is, and how thoughtful, in spite of his inexperience and ignorance of sexual matters.
I said in my comment that The Education of Ennis del Mar has begun - but it occurs to me that The Education of Jack Twist has also begun! A great chapter in a great story.
Marie
victopet:
--- Quote from: mariez on October 08, 2007, 01:58:23 pm ---
I said in my comment that The Education of Ennis del Mar has begun - but it occurs to me that The Education of Jack Twist has also begun! A great chapter in a great story.
Marie
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Yay!
I think, more than anything, what I am setting out to accomplish with this is that both of them have something to learn AND something to teach. And that neither way is right or wrong. It just happens to be what you need to do to find your place in the world (and it's not always the place you're born into -- sometimes it takes some searching.)
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: victopet on October 09, 2007, 11:27:28 pm ---Yay!
I think, more than anything, what I am setting out to accomplish with this is that both of them have something to learn AND something to teach. And that neither way is right or wrong. It just happens to be what you need to do to find your place in the world (and it's not always the place you're born into -- sometimes it takes some searching.)
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I love that about your story (one of the many things I love about it), they are both going to learn the things they need to learn in life to grow as human beings, for themselves and for each other!
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