to be fair to you as a writer, el_wing, I did read a chapter of your latest story and I think there is a contrast between what you are writing and the standard RPS fare - because there seems to be an actual story unfolding. However, this is not the main feature of many RPS tales - the main feature is sexual encounters and the emotional drama that surrounds it. I have always disliked reading things where the purpose of the story is sex, otherwise known as "Porn without plot", and I think this is far more prevalent in RPS stories than in fan fiction ones. In fact, there are a number of fan fics that are not at all explicit, and whatever sex occurred happened "off screen" as it were.