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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on April 11, 2008, 11:11:53 pm ---Chapter 37 for the changeup!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/266698.html
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SPOILERS
The changeup and some curveballs, too! I did have the feeling the plea agreement was going to be in trouble, but Amos's new attorney was a surprise. That's all Colson and Ellery need on top of everything else - a Beagle reminder. And who are these other new clients in Greenlea County that Eagleton and Spry have taken on? That can't be good.
Wes, as usual, gave Ellery good advice about the restraining order. That idea was making me uncomfortable and I don't think it would have been helpful at all in the long run. The phone number, however, does need to be changed "toot sweet" as Wes would say.
...an then when she never did get pregnant I began ta worry somethin worse was wrong with her.”
Ellery's not the only one who wants to hear more about this! Not a good day for Ellery's blood pressure, but he did keep his cool in the meeting, so he is learning.
Now what?
Thanks,
Marie
louisev:
and this is now what!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/266960.html 'Chapter 38'
mariez:
SPOILERS
Paula handled that well. I do hope Pam remembers to keep all her answers short and specific. Laura didn't even want her 20 year old daughter to talk to boys? Oh, my.
Poor thing. On top of everything else, she's still counting days and worrying about a pregnancy. And speaking of pregnancies, I wonder if the next time Laura calls the Cantrell/Grey household she'll get a recording telling her that number is no longer in service! That should bring about some interesting reactions.....
Great job, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
sorry for the irregular postings, folkses... I had some personal business to attend to and I'm still a little too fascinated with political blogging, but I promise I will be resuming work on this story as soon as possible!
louisev:
and finally, chapter 39!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/267048.html
a little humor.
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