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mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on April 19, 2008, 05:53:12 pm ---at last, another chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/267455.html  Chapter 40

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Yikes! Teddy Eldredge phoning Pam? Why?  That's wrong in so many ways I don't know where to begin.  Paula and the Yavapai county prosecutor need to be notified "toot sweet" as Wes would say.  And what is Laura's angle?  Before all this happened, she doesn't want Pam speaking with Teddy and now she gives him, the brother of the alleged perpetrator, the Browns' phone number?!?!!!!  Maybe it is time for that restraining order......

And I can't quite figure out what's going on in Ellery's mind about the ranch, either.....

I love how you keep us guessing, Louise!

Thanks,
Marie

frantic65:
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Chapter 40


Looks like everyone needs a new phone number thanks to Laura's raging hormones or whatever her deal is.

And who's idea was it to have Teddy look Pam up anyway? Laura has just been twisted enough lately to be the

one to reach out to him like maybe Pam would drop the charges if she's dating her rapist's brother. Ick!

Ellery's ranch obsession is confusing to me because he is feeding the flames, as it were, Colson really doesn't seem

interested and actually may be getting annoyed by his pushing the idea and I think Ellery is encouraging even more

headaches with these unpredictable Grey girls when he keeps bringing it up.

Never a dull moment!!

Thanks Louise!

Fran


mariez:
Chapter 41 popped up on my f-list this morning, so I'll post the link!  :)

http://louisev.livejournal.com/267654.html


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I think Laura needs to be taught a few words and phrases.  Blackmail is a form of extortion, which is a felony.  Interference with a criminal investigation is also a felony.  Obstruction of justice is also floating around in my mind.  She's pathetic, desperate and ignorant and I understand that, but if she wants to play hardball (and apparently she does) she needs to learn the rules of the game. (Can you tell I've had a bad couple of weeks and I'm not in the mood for b.s? LOL!) 

I hope the Glenfiddle helps, these boys needs some serious relaxation!

I can't even guess what the next chapter will bring ....

Thanks,
Marie


souxi:

--- Quote from: mariez on April 21, 2008, 07:30:30 am ---Chapter 41 popped up on my f-list this morning, so I'll post the link!  :)

http://louisev.livejournal.com/267654.html


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I think Laura needs to be taught a few words and phrases.  Blackmail is a form of extortion, which is a felony.  Interference with a criminal investigation is also a felony.  Obstruction of justice is also floating around in my mind.  She's pathetic, desperate and ignorant and I understand that, but if she wants to play hardball (and apparently she does) she needs to learn the rules of the game. (Can you tell I've had a bad couple of weeks and I'm not in the mood for b.s? LOL!) 

I hope the Glenfiddle helps, these boys needs some serious relaxation!

I can't even guess what the next chapter will bring ....

Thanks,
Marie




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Marie have a read of my comments on Louise,s LJ. I,ll teach that old crone a few words and phrases and I promise you, NONE of them will be polite ones either. grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. >:( >:( >:( >:( >:(

louisev:

--- Quote from: mariez on April 21, 2008, 07:30:30 am ---Chapter 41 popped up on my f-list this morning, so I'll post the link!  :)

http://louisev.livejournal.com/267654.html


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whoooops!  I don't know how I forgot to post the link!  Oh well, writing it is the important thing!

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