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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
souxi:
And yes it,s true that Colson probably does have to snap out of it. He,s hurting Ellery something awful talking about leaving him. He can,t change the past, but he can try and change the present. Don,t let Laura ruin your life Colson. Don,t let the old bitch ruin your relationship with Ellery. Toughen up and face it like a man. I,ll deal with Laura, no problem atall. muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
;) ;D
mariez:
--- Quote from: souxi on June 16, 2008, 03:33:20 pm ---I think that half the reason Colson wants to run now, as apose to before, is because Laura has got the police involved in looking into him. Even though Ellery is a policeman the law still pretty much terrifies him doesn't it? The thought of his past/background being investigated must be scaring him beyond belief....
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Oh, you're right - Colson is absolutely terrified of the police/authority figures! And that's why I don't think this has to do with fears of being dragged out of his house and beaten - Det. Blue and the prosecutor aren't going to do that and he knows it. But they could expose him to a larger group of people outside of the safety zone Ellery has created for him in Tourmaline. I understand that. But it almost seems that he doesn't want to listen to Ellery's reassurances that he can't be prosecuted - he's fighting that logic tooth and nail. So the deeper questions still remain.
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on June 16, 2008, 03:45:09 pm ---
Hmm, doesn't Edna have a rolling pin? Didn't Wes make a comment about that once? ;) ;D
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:laugh: Oh, there have to be a lot of interesting utensils in Edna's kitchen!
--- Quote from: louise van hine on June 16, 2008, 02:46:05 pm ---This is preying on my mind about now so don't be surprised if you see an update again quite soon! After a hectic 14 hour Friday things have settled back down at work and I am doing a lot less actual technical thinking so I might just be able to pull off some during-the-week updates! Stay tuned!!!
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You're the best, Louise! Thanks! :-*
Marie
louisev:
and here it is, without any ado whatsoever!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/271409.html Chapter 55 !
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on June 16, 2008, 08:41:02 pm ---and here it is, without any ado whatsoever!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/271409.html Chapter 55 !
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SPOILERS
You've had a lot of truly fine moments, Louise - but this is surely one of your finest. I'm so incredibly moved by the wisdom and depth and sheer beauty of your writing. A powerful chapter that will stay with me for a long time.
Thank you.
Marie
louisev:
awwww *blush* thanks!
I got a lot of hits on this chapter today, I'm glad I stayed up to write it!
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