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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls

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louisev:
er, no?

mariez:

--- Quote from: belbbmfan on July 22, 2008, 12:42:15 am ---
Dang! Are they EVER going to get some peace and quiet?  :-\

Thanks Louise!

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--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 22, 2008, 11:08:41 am ---er, no?

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Well, kudos for the honesty, Louise!  LOL! Sigh.  With all the sturm und drang, it was almost a relief to hear about those effin' mice again!  I loved hearing Jeremy chide Ellery about his "rookie mistake" and the "homosexual tendencies" talk was a hoot!  LOL! 

But, oh my.....the rib?  That's not good.  Not good at all.  (And I didn't see that coming either!   ;D )

Thanks for the stealth chapter!

Marie

louisev:
come on now, I have been giving hints in the past ten chapters or so about Ellery's chest!

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 22, 2008, 01:32:41 pm ---come on now, I have been giving hints in the past ten chapters or so about Ellery's chest!

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I should re-word that.  You hardly ever give hints - so I didn't think you'd actually go through with it!  :laugh: 

And is it harder for a rib to go back into place the second time?   Good thing they were able to get some good fancy mansex in this morning b/c it looks like they're gonna have a dry spell, which won't improve anyone's mood I'm sure.   :-\

Good grief.  Now what?

Marie

louisev:
dry spells are a real pain in the you know what!

But to find out what all's going to transpire... STAY TUNED.

I might actually get another chapter written tonight... just like the good old days!  I know I don't have to cook so there just might be time to squeeze it in!

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