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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
louisev:
and here is... chapter 2
http://louisev.livejournal.com/257181.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 01, 2008, 10:40:53 pm ---and here is... chapter 2
http://louisev.livejournal.com/257181.html
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SPOILERS
“I thought Lauren was gonna take care a that, or Sally.”
Wayne, you would try the patience of a saint.....
...they are gonna be there needin stuff an wantin ta spend time with me an... frankly I don’t know...”
Well, yes, they are, and yes, they will - that's all part and parcel of being a parent, Colson.....
“I drove all the way down here ta fetch my girls,an you an your fancy pants policeman better not stand in my way,” said Laura, trembling with indignation.
Sigh. I guess we will be seeing that Laura/Edna meeting.......
You packed a lot of good stuff into this chapter, Louise!
Thanks,
Maire
louisev:
that is Wayne - he should have a t-shirt that says 'Wearing the Patience of Saints'
louisev:
and here is chapter 3!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/257368.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 02, 2008, 04:21:52 pm ---and here is chapter 3!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/257368.html
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Whoowee! Two chapters in one day for me. Thanks Louise.
SPOILERS
How Ellery can go and listen to his tapes after that conversation, I'll never understand. But relaxation is something that everyone can use right now. So much tension and desperation.
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