Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[ifyoucantfixit]

  I got a boy he smiles a lot
He said as he trembled in his spot
But kids and wives weren't on their minds
they wanted to touch each other's behinds
The Siesta Inn, and a jouncing bed, is what they got.

[Katie77]

  I got a boy he smiles a lot
He said as he trembled in his spot
But kids and wives weren't on their minds
they wanted to touch each other's behinds
The Siesta Inn, and a jouncing bed, is what they got.

that one turned out real funny....

[Katie77]

Lets get goin and do some fishin

[mariez]

Lets get goin and do some fishin
They were both in the same condition

[CellarDweller]

Lets get goin and do some fishin
They were both in the same condition
feelin' horny as hell

[Katie77]

Lets get goin and do some fishin
They were both in the same condition
feelin' horny as hell
which was easy to tell

[CellarDweller]

Lets get goin and do some fishin
They were both in the same condition
feelin' horny as hell
which was easy to tell
to fuck was their one true ambition.

[mariez]

He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair

[Katie77]

He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair

Wasnt sure what to do for the next line, cause I wasnt sure WHO you were describing.....

[mariez]

Wasnt sure what to do for the next line, cause I wasnt sure WHO you were describing.....

Oops, sorry about that!  I think I've read the short story too many times.     I went and looked up the line I was thinking of -  it's from Aguirre's point of view, looking at Ennis:

"..Last summer had goddamn near twenty-five percent loss. I don’t want that again. YOU,” he said to Ennis, taking in the ragged hair, the big nicked hands, the jeans torn.... “

Marie