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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale

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louisev:
and here is Chapter 33:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/284254.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 20, 2008, 04:56:54 pm ---and here is Chapter 33:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/284254.html

--- End quote ---

SPOILERS




“That include you?” Ellery shot back, defensive.

Ha!  Nice try, Ellery!  But it looks like Wes has all his bases covered. 

“Time for a little harsher interrogation I’d say,” Ellery said, smiling grimly now.

Uh oh.  Ellery is smiling grimly.  I wouldn't want to be David the towel boy.  LOL.

Thanks, Louise!
Marie

louisev:
stay tuned for more grim smiling.

louisev:
and here is chapter 34:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/284630.html

mariez:
SPOILERS





“No controllin who ya love. I was in love with a thief once. A thief who stole from me.”

I really like the way Ellery handled David - tough and no nonsense, but he showed some compassion, too.  And I think the fact that Ellery was honest enough to admit that he hasn't always been the best judge of character himself will make it easier for David to admit his part.

And Colson is irresistible when he's shy and scared.   :)

Thanks, Louise!
Marie

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