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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
and at long last, with the waning of the Christmas holiday, here is Chapter 35!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/284787.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Both Sheriff Wes and Dr. Caulfield were so impressive with their talks. Obviously, Wes understands his staff and Henry has a firm grasp, not only on what his job will entail, but on the discomfort many of them may feel in speaking with him.
“Not shy about stating his opinions.”
LOL. Yeah, you could say that!
It'll be interesting to see Henry and Ellery interact, but right now I'm more interested in seeing how Henry and Paula size each other up on their first impressions!
And what's this about the Paso Fino?
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
And here is chapter 36!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/285079.html
Sorry about the slow delivery here, I got sidetracked by more good fiction! I'm a hopeless reader sometimes too!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 04, 2009, 07:35:36 pm ---And here is chapter 36!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/285079.html
Sorry about the slow delivery here, I got sidetracked by more good fiction! I'm a hopeless reader sometimes too!
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Reading is a good thing, Louise!
SPOILERS
Oh, the naked swimmin’s legal an all. As long as ya don’t strip down on the wrong side a the cones,” Colson reassured him. “I wouldn’t a done it if there wasn’t a sign.”
LOL. Colson is so adorably law abiding. I know Ellery thinks he's over-reacting to the anonymous note under the door, but I can't blame him too much. Colson's right that Sevigny seemed harmless at first, too. I understand why Ellery is bound and determined to solve the break-in himself, but he sometimes has a tendency to use poor judgment when he's so personally involved ...... :-\
Thanks, Louise! :)
Marie
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 05, 2009, 02:23:31 pm ---Reading is a good thing, Louise!
SPOILERS
Oh, the naked swimmin’s legal an all. As long as ya don’t strip down on the wrong side a the cones,” Colson reassured him. “I wouldn’t a done it if there wasn’t a sign.”
LOL. Colson is so adorably law abiding. I know Ellery thinks he's over-reacting to the anonymous note under the door, but I can't blame him too much. Colson's right that Sevigny seemed harmless at first, too. I understand why Ellery is bound and determined to solve the break-in himself, but he sometimes has a tendency to use poor judgment when he's so personally involved ...... :-\
Thanks, Louise! :)
Marie
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but didn't ya think that Colson might have been rationalizing a bit on the "naked swimmin" in order to make it seem more legit to Wes?
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