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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
Aw, poor Colson .... but I love the hair combing idea, of course :) . And Ellery does know how to handle his man.
Actually, I've been in hotels where I have .... err... heard quite clearly the activies going on in the next room (but don't tell Colson that! ;) )
“If I’m wrong, then what?”
“Then I’m on top next time.”
Looks like Colson can't lose! :laugh:
Thanks, Louise
Marie
belbbmfan:
“I got an itch only you can scratch, boy, an if that’s what it takes ...”
OMG, that's one for the books Louise! :laugh: Fantastic dialogue, as always.
And searching a hotel room? Now that brings back memories...
I'm loving this, thanks Louise! :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on September 26, 2008, 11:59:58 am ---And searching a hotel room? Now that brings back memories...
--- End quote ---
Oh, it sure does .... last time they were searching for a wedding ring. This time they're wearing wedding rings! :D
But that spark of electricity is still there, stronger than ever!
Marie
louisev:
heheheheh yes searching a hotel room... what memories!
I am going out tonight to a presidential debate party, but I will be back tomorrow in full 'search' mode!
louisev:
and here is chapter 5!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/276955.html
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