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mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 27, 2008, 03:39:39 pm ---and here is chapter 5!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/276955.html

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Well, I'm glad Mr. Coyote didn't stay away too long!   ;D  After all they've been through recently, they really need this time away. 

All Ellery had to worry about was himself and Colson.

And that's more than enough!  Their new friend David sure is insistent, isn't he?  LOL!   I think it's time to put out the "Do Not Disturb" sign along with that deadbolt!  Thanks, Louise!

Marie

louisev:
Bonus chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/277063.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 27, 2008, 07:52:31 pm ---Bonus chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/277063.html

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What a great surprise, Louise!  And we got to peek in on Jeremy and Nick, too, which I always appreciate.  We knew Nick had family issues, but it sounds like maybe something has happened recently? Nick was very defensive/sensitive, even more so than usual.  Or maybe it's just the idea of having to step into Ellery's world where he feels very insecure. 

Nice that the girls invited them to dinner - and we can always count on the Grey girls to embarrass each other and give us a good laugh! 

Thanks for the bonus!

Marie

louisev:
oh that's what those girls are good for - that awkward adolescent timing that always makes for lots of drama!

I decided that what it was I was woolgathering about was that I didn't want to get involved in another high stakes plot involving everybody and everything with mysterious plot twists and turns, but just a pretty much straight narrative for a while.

So far, so good!

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: mariez on September 27, 2008, 08:17:22 pm ---
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What a great surprise, Louise!  And we got to peek in on Jeremy and Nick, too, which I always appreciate.  We knew Nick had family issues, but it sounds like maybe something has happened recently? Nick was very defensive/sensitive, even more so than usual.  Or maybe it's just the idea of having to step into Ellery's world where he feels very insecure. 

Nice that the girls invited them to dinner - and we can always count on the Grey girls to embarrass each other and give us a good laugh! 

Thanks for the bonus!

Marie

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Yep, I think that's it. The fact that he still goes on about Jeremy's supposed crush on Ellery is telling enough. Nice of Jeremy to not go into it.

But I love the fact that even Nick couldn't say no to Edna's chili recipe.

I wonder why Pam calls her dad 'Colson' and not dad(dy)?


--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 27, 2008, 08:26:32 pm ---

So far, so good!

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You can say that again.

Thanks Louise.  :)

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