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mariez:

--- Quote from: louisev on January 31, 2009, 03:38:20 pm ---
Happy Saturday everyone!

Here is chapter 39!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/285918.html

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Why, thank you, Louise.  Happy Saturday to you, too.   :)

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What an excellent chapter.  The conversation between Mel and Paula rang so true, with both of them choosing their words so carefully.  I understand Paula's indignation and I really like Mel's measured response to her questions and concerns.  He's right that Paula does have to find her own way in dealing with Ellery and others in law enforcement and I think she's come a long way in that regard. 

I am sure Caulfield is good at what he does, but I don’t know if he’s ever run into a true old-fashioned lawman before.

And certainly not one like Ellery, who is one of a kind!  I don't know whether to be looking forward to the meeting between Dr. Caulfield and Ellery or dreading it!  Probably a little of both - but, in any case, it won't be dull!   :laugh:

Thanks!
Marie

belbbmfan:
Yes thanks Louise, nice to see a Saturday update  :).



And Paula deserved to hear every word Mel said to her. Go Mel!

I agree Marie that the meeting between Caulfield and Ellery will be fireworks.  ;D

louisev:
stay tuned, Ellery fans. I'm working on another chapter.

Leslie talked me into making it a Twofer Saturday, since you all have been so very very patient!

louisev:
and lo and behold!

I been inspired.  Chapter 40.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/285979.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louisev on January 31, 2009, 04:57:38 pm ---and lo and behold!

I been inspired.  Chapter 40.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/285918.html

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Cool!  Thanks for the twofer, Louise - and thanks to Leslie, too.  :) 

Louise, it looks like you repeated the link for Chapter 39.  Here's the one for Chapter 40:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/285979.html

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Once again, Ellery was really at his best here, and it reinforces what Mel told Paula about Ellery's personality being his weapon.  Always a treat to see Ellery in action.



“I like it when yer doin yer job.”

Woo Hoo.  Look's like Colson has been inspired, too!  :laugh:  Thanks!

Marie

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