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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
I am sure trying to make it fun. So far Colson isn't enjoying himself too too much!!!
louisev:
And confrontation comes quickly!
Chapter 12: http://louisev.livejournal.com/278534.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 03, 2008, 09:20:16 pm ---
And confrontation comes quickly!
Chapter 12: http://louisev.livejournal.com/278534.html
--- End quote ---
SPOILERS
I feel for Colson - this is a lot for him to take in at once .... but I do understand Ellery's desire to throw caution to the wind and just be FREE for a change. And I think in the long run this will be good for Colson, too - I hope!
“I ain’t takin my clothes off,” Colson warned once more.
“Ya don’t have to.”
Hmmm... well, I guess that remains to be seen! :laugh: Thanks, Louise.
Marie
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 30, 2008, 09:03:23 pm ---chapter 11:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/278294.html
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:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
This story is so much fun Louise.
But I'm wondering if, after this trip Colson will ever agree to go on holiday again... :-\ ;D
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 03, 2008, 09:20:16 pm ---
And confrontation comes quickly!
Chapter 12: http://louisev.livejournal.com/278534.html
--- End quote ---
Hmmm, I'm hoping that the beach won't be crowded (or better, completely empty LOL). Maybe that way Colson might lighten up a bit.
Looking forward to the next chapter Louise. Thanks. :)
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