Our BetterMost Community > Creative Writer's Corner

In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale

<< < (10/39) > >>

louisev:
I am sure trying to make it fun.  So far Colson isn't enjoying himself too too much!!!

louisev:
 
And confrontation comes quickly!

Chapter 12:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/278534.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 03, 2008, 09:20:16 pm ---
And confrontation comes quickly!

Chapter 12:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/278534.html

--- End quote ---

SPOILERS







I feel for Colson - this is a lot for him to take in at once .... but I do understand Ellery's desire to throw caution to the wind and just be FREE for a change.  And I think in the long run this will be good for Colson, too - I hope!

“I ain’t takin my clothes off,” Colson warned once more.

“Ya don’t have to.”

Hmmm... well, I guess that remains to be seen!   :laugh:  Thanks, Louise.

Marie

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 30, 2008, 09:03:23 pm ---chapter 11:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/278294.html

--- End quote ---


 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

This story is so much fun Louise.

But I'm wondering if, after this trip Colson will ever agree to go on holiday again... :-\  ;D

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 03, 2008, 09:20:16 pm ---
And confrontation comes quickly!

Chapter 12:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/278534.html

--- End quote ---

Hmmm, I'm hoping that the beach won't be crowded (or better, completely empty LOL). Maybe that way Colson might lighten up a bit.

Looking forward to the next chapter Louise. Thanks.  :)

Navigation

[0] Message Index

[#] Next page

[*] Previous page

Go to full version