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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
you don't have to wait anymore!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/278891.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 05, 2008, 04:01:29 pm ---you don't have to wait anymore!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/278891.html
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SPOILERS
Wow - that is some changeup you pitched at us, Louise. You do like to keep us on our toes! The banter between Wes and Jeremy was terrific, and it shows that they've reached a comfortable level of familiarity with each other, with Jeremy telling Wes maybe he shouldn't be phoning Ellery so much and pointing out how messy his office is, and with Wes growling at him to get out of his office. LOL! I especially liked Wes's references to "constitutional weaknesses" - he does know his boys, especially Ellery!
Good grief, Sevigny is claiming he pled guilty under duress? Sigh. That's all Ellery needs. I hope he got some good relaxation time in at the beach ..... Thanks, Louise. :)
Marie
louisev:
I did a whole lot of thinking about the plot here and ... fact is, if there isn't any police or lawyer work in it, it just wouldn't be normal! But this takes a bit of a different tack than the plots we have seen in the past. At least I hope it does.
I like to envision Wes's sheriff's office looking pretty much like a paperwork pit, and all of his subordinates have their own lesser sinkhole pits of paperwork, with the notable exception of Reynolds, whose desk is clean as a whistle and whose reports are always filed on time. But the real question is -- where is Amos Marigold's arrest report???
louisev:
And a little note to all you Readers and Commenters - you know who you are!!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/279154.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on October 05, 2008, 04:01:29 pm ---you don't have to wait anymore!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/278891.html
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Jeez, it never is 'just another quiet day at the office' is it?
Wes shrugged. “Hell if I know :laugh: You can say that again Sheriff!
Poor Ellery, and poor Colson. >:( I have a feeling that their vacation will be coming to and end way too soon.
Thanks Louise.
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